The adventures of a travelling couple

[LiverpoolMaster]

A short story possibility.

Couple A: very wealthy, no-need-to-work, enjoying life by travelling around from place to place and seeking out new, intimate encounters. She's bi, has a taste for older women and the pair are always on the look-out for such.

At a motor show, they chance across a bumptious, self-important car dealer who's also visiting the exhibition, accompanied by his wife (Couple B). Back story: husband B is a womaniser and has always treated his older, timid wife domineeringly as a possession - this is one of her rare, permitted trips into the outside world.

After a quiet discussion to one side, Couple A decide to "try for" the wife. It's made out that they are owners of a company which needs to renew its fleet of vehicles and "maybe they could place the business with husband B's dealership". Husband B's eyes light up not just at this career-boosting prospect but also at the possibility of somehow getting his hands on wife A... who's been busy giving him the eye. A candlelit dinner is arranged at Couple B's place to smooth the deal through, during which wife A passes a note under the table to husband B, while husband A does likewise to wife B...

The final scene would be a few evenings later: husband B arrives in London, all set for a sexual encounter with wife A - after finding he's been set up, it will be hours before he can get home. Meanwhile, wife A is actually at the B residence, pleasuring wife B who is on the verge of having her first female-induced orgasm. Husband A is patiently waiting his turn.

 

[Magineer]

Had a bit of trouble following that but perseverance is a virtue...

I like the premise, although it might be a tricky matter to explain the nature of couple A to your reader at the beginning - unless you're not going to, which would make the rest of it a harder sell. Maybe you'd need an opening scene in which this is revealed in some way... a quiet discussion between the husband and wife over a coffee at the exhibition's café where past triumphs are mentioned? And then they spot couple B?

 

[000zing]

I quite like the background you've suggested - in effect, a couple who travel round with this interesting "hobby". The onward story you've put up is just one possibility derivable from it. The gays would like it if he were also bi, I suppose.

I can see them targeting older wives in many different situations, sometimes those of the rich and famous whereas "going downmarket" would also not be excluded!