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patricia51

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In all the reveling of the posted comments and feedback emails I've received on my latest story "As The Worm Turns" I have had two stick in my mind and I want to say something about them. Since both were anonymous I don't know any other way to do it except through here.

One very nice person commented they were happy that "someone was man enough to write this (my story)". The other very nice person thanked me for "having the balls to write this". Thank you both.

HELLO! The 1947 Patricia model did not come with balls as either factory or dealer options. Apparently someone did order late arriving extra rear padding and I wish that same person had ordered larger front airbags. I did hastily make a self-exam and check with my husband for confirmation and we both agree...I'm female.

I do assume both were meant as compliments and not confusion about my gender. So thanks again and guys? please watch it next time.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=134989
 
Oh, Lord - that is funny!

Chin up, girl - once you get an AV up -you can show them just how lovely the 1947 Patricia model is! I love that. Heehee - tickles me to the bone --
 
Even now, with no AV, you can do an illustrated poem or story including your pic., erotic or not.
 
This is a fairly common start to some emails I've gotten from male readers:

Dear Jayne,

Are you a woman?...



It doesn't bother me though. I take it as a compliment. It means the reader identified with the story enough to think that I must be male to get such a masculine POV. (I'm not)

I think it's the same here with your story (terrific, btw, gave you a five). Even though you wrote it from the female perspective, the situation was decidely a masculine reaction. You showed the response that most guys would have if their wives came home smelling of sex with other men and then had the nerve to brag about it, and I think that's what they're reacting to.

Anyway, great story.

Jayne
 
If anyone would take the time to read the rest of Patricia's stories I'm quite sure this would not have come up.
Her Serve And Protect stories are some of the best I have read, but then again I love a man in uniform, right Patti? :D



Pam
 
Patricia

I think it was just reflects the uncertainty of the times we live in.

For instance take Honey123’s AV.

There’s many a man that has been ‘surprised’ when similar ‘women’ have turned over onto their right sides.

(No offence intended. Honey123)

Good story Patricia, keep them coming.

Perhaps one day ‘Loving Wives’ will be only be about, truly loving wives

Robert
 
robert12 said:
Patricia

I think it was just reflects the uncertainty of the times we live in.

For instance take Honey123’s AV.

There’s many a man that has been ‘surprised’ when similar ‘women’ have turned over onto their right sides.

(No offence intended. Honey123)

Good story Patricia, keep them coming.

Perhaps one day ‘Loving Wives’ will be only be about, truly loving wives

Robert

Robert,

No offense taken and I agree with you totally. I could say to you that you would definately NOT be disappointed should you turn me over on my left or right side, but that's not with this thread is about.

I think Patricia needed to vent and she did so in a very humorous way...I enjoyed your story, Patricia and hope to read more.

Honey
 
patricia51 said:
In all the reveling of the posted comments and feedback emails I've received on my latest story "As The Worm Turns" I have had two stick in my mind and I want to say something about them. Since both were anonymous I don't know any other way to do it except through here.

One very nice person commented they were happy that "someone was man enough to write this (my story)". The other very nice person thanked me for "having the balls to write this". Thank you both.

HELLO! The 1947 Patricia model did not come with balls as either factory or dealer options. Apparently someone did order late arriving extra rear padding and I wish that same person had ordered larger front airbags. I did hastily make a self-exam and check with my husband for confirmation and we both agree...I'm female.


ME: Actually That sounds like it could have been fun


I do assume both were meant as compliments and not confusion about my gender. So thanks again and guys? please watch it next time.

ME: I notice in conversastions that these days any person who does something the talker likes has balls, whatever the gender. So they may know but are using it as a generic compliment.

But as to your story. Anyone who is reading this and hasn't should read it. Nice little more or less lighthearted tale with more real world ending. And by the way the two cops are Starsky and Hutch :)
Or so I guessed. :)



TabooTeller
 
Actually y'all I really did take them both as compliments. Its just that everytime I looked at them (I saved them both, couldn't help it) I started giggling again. However I must say this has been a lot of fun getting your replies and I delight that I've made a couple new friends because of it.

Patricia

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=204232
 
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