Thank you for your comments on Hollywood Nights

[Guest]

I want to thank everyone for sending such positive feedback on Hollywood Nights. It was a year in writing and more in editing. I hope every author gets meaningful feedback like the comments I've received. Thank you, Laurel and Manu, for posting it. I'll be sending more soon.

Che

 

[ran carew]

Your stories

Your stories rock!
I'm new to Literotica.com - what a discovery!
Your descriptions of oral/facial cumshots are as good as I've come across anywhere, to coin a phrase. If a suggestion is in order: linger on those facials...
When can we expect more? Soon?
--Ran

 

[Guest]

Hollywood Nights

ran carew,

Thanks for the very complimentary remarks. Did you read the entire novel? Laurel has posted a few of my other stories and has maybe 3 in the wings. I really love to write and getting feedback is much appreciated! Let me know what you think of my other stories as you read them.

Che

 

[ran carew]

More on yr stories

Che, man, it's like I told you: your stories rock. All of 'em. Yes, I've read them all and look forward to the upcoming 3.
Hollywood Nights contains my favorite scenes (Venessa at home... and, earlier, the scene (ch II) with Marla watching Leticia take Michael's cum, on video). I like Cum Again a lot, too. The Winter Nights stories appeal to me less, but they're impressive as hell as literature, and erotic as hell too. I just prefer the contemporary stuff.
And like I say, just keep on keeping on. Don't forget that there's NEVER too much lingering description of a facial cumshot, where each rope lands and how the girl welcomes it and asks for more. (I say this despite the fact that at college someone once told me that the famed Olympia Press of mid-century Paris had a house rule about how no orgasm was allowed to cover more than so-and-so-many pages... I forget now how many! But facials are visual, after all: just made for description...)
--Ran