Thank you for the positive feedback.

[Lolita30]

Hi Literotica gang! I just want to say many thanks to the positive responses to my story thus far! Believe it or not, but I didn't think I could do it. This is my first time writing a story of an erotic nature and I'll admit, it got me all hot and bothered! I will be working on another one soon, you can bet on that! Keep the responses comming!

 

[Wtxm9e4h]

Spiderbitching

Did his come stick to your pussy, like spiderfluid? Some sick bitch you are huh.

 

[SexyChele]

Re: Spiderbitching

Did his come stick to your pussy, like spiderfluid? Some sick bitch you are huh.

Hmmmm - I think a nerve has been touched here. Not your type of story, I take it?

Just a hint: constructive criticism is always more helpful then a simplistic put down.

 

[Wtxm9e4h]

Was it constructive? I was offended by the author's objectification of the actor in the story. Arguably more dramatic than pictures of Britney with Cameron's fingers up her, but there is enough to go round!

 

[Ray Dario]

Lolita;

Don't worry about him. Some people must put others down to make themselves feel better.

I read your story. It certainly isn't any worse than most of them here and it's a lot better than many. Keep writing and welcome to Lit.

Ray

 

[SexyChele]

Was it constructive? I was offended by the author's objectification of the actor in the story. Arguably more dramatic than pictures of Britney with Cameron's fingers up her, but there is enough to go round!

I'm not the author, but this could prove at least a little more helpful than the previous post. We write stories that don't always appeal to everyone, that's a fact. But if you don't like a story, it helps the writer to know what it was about it that you didn't like or offended you. If I was Lolita, I would your comments her more informative. But, it is her story.

 

[Lolita30]

My story

You're right, it is my story. I wrote it because i wanted to, to see if i had what it took to be a successful writer. I know that some people didn't like it, and that's fine. But I'm sure they didn't post one themselves. As far as me being a sick bitch, no I'm not actually. I have a life and I don't go around blasting people's work. That was not the idea of posting this story. If you have a better story, send it to me. Since youre offended by my characters, then you shouldn't have read it!

 

[the_bragis]

Not your cup of tea?

Every single author here posts their story/stories in the hope that they will be read and enjoyed by others.

Alone for the time and effort they spend doing it, they deserve a little encouragement and respect, along with any criticism.

Like Charles De Gaulle said, "In a country where alone there are over 700 varities of cheese, it is impossible to please everyone."

It's much the same here.

Have good day,

Alex(fem)