I usually get little feedback on my stories and as such, write very few. A couple of weeks ago I read a story on this site by, "Just Plain Bob." It was a "loving wives" story that wasn't bad until the end where the cheating wife had her husband raped by 5 guys and blackmailed him into becoming the usual, "cuckold" husband.
I had already decided to write a story that was based in part on my own story. The ending I had picked out, although embellished, was fairly close to the truth. Instead, the rape scene and it's unrealistic results from the other story bothered me so, I incorporated it into my own story, but with a much more realistic ending. I had no idea it would generate so much controversy and so much interest. In the note section, before the story begins, I had explained about borrowing the rape scene, but my explanation did not accompany the story. So, I got several bad reviews from others who thought I had plagiarized that part.
In addition I received e-mails and feedback with questions regarding other aspects of the story. There was enough interest that I have written a sequel to the story. It explains, in her own words, how Judy, a loving wife, made so many bad decisions and came to conspire to the blackmail of her husband.
The first story is, "Picture perfect." I know it contains several mistakes and I'm sorry for not editing it more closely. The story was done in one sitting late at night. The sequel is entitled, "Not so picture perfect," and is now in the pending stage and should be release in another day or two.
To all the people who had questions regarding the first story, I hope the sequel will answer them for you and I hope everyone enjoys the reading.
Thank you.
I had already decided to write a story that was based in part on my own story. The ending I had picked out, although embellished, was fairly close to the truth. Instead, the rape scene and it's unrealistic results from the other story bothered me so, I incorporated it into my own story, but with a much more realistic ending. I had no idea it would generate so much controversy and so much interest. In the note section, before the story begins, I had explained about borrowing the rape scene, but my explanation did not accompany the story. So, I got several bad reviews from others who thought I had plagiarized that part.
In addition I received e-mails and feedback with questions regarding other aspects of the story. There was enough interest that I have written a sequel to the story. It explains, in her own words, how Judy, a loving wife, made so many bad decisions and came to conspire to the blackmail of her husband.
The first story is, "Picture perfect." I know it contains several mistakes and I'm sorry for not editing it more closely. The story was done in one sitting late at night. The sequel is entitled, "Not so picture perfect," and is now in the pending stage and should be release in another day or two.
To all the people who had questions regarding the first story, I hope the sequel will answer them for you and I hope everyone enjoys the reading.
Thank you.
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