Terrible Day at The Orifice

[ThatAntGuy]

I have just finished a short story, just over two thousand seven hundred words long. It contains Non-consent/Reluctance & anal.

I would appreciate any criticism, structure or help you are willing to offer.

I run everything through spellcheck & I don't think I'm terrible when it comes to grammar but, in saying that, I'm no Editor.

Thank you for taking the time to read.

 

[CopperSkink]

Copperskink will edit for you.