Temptress In The Void

[Lunaharlet25]

The eyes of others followed me, glazed by lust and desire. The innocence of a lamb being torn to pieces by a pack of starving wolves. I was then tricked by someone I trusted, and now I'm horny in a void. it's the very element of primitive nature. As the blood warms and thins through the body, the sound of flowing breaths syncing together. My meaty gushy wet vagina has me ready to gush out Atlantis. My nipples harden into two semi chocolate chips giving my titties the form of nurture and satisfaction. Now smell of my Paolo/jasmine vagina and tell me your desires will not be fulfilled. From every scrotum sac to the tip of the well defined hard head of a penis, You desire, wants and needs is all you can seem to want right now. I'm the opposite of medusa look at me and you will be turned into a new release like blockbuster. I excite the unexcited, store life to what was dead, and conjure a new beginning if you allow me too. The people Ive graced, the favors I fulfilled. Only to not have no one help me when i needs it. Rub my lamp, oh rub my lamp! Release me from the dark cramped void I've been in. Your admiration alone is enough for me to want to release.
Temptress in the Void.
GEENIE IN A VOID
Might add more to it but rough draft preedit

 

[42BelowsBack]

Welcome.

 

[SapioSexual9]

Hi Luna Welcome. Turn on your dms if, open honest feedback is desired.

The eyes of others followed me, glazed by lust and desire. The innocence of a lamb being torn to pieces by a pack of starving wolves.
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Your admiration alone is enough for me to want to release.
Temptress in the Void.

The poem seems to be a progression; perhaps from innocence to desire? The switch in imagery from wolves and lamb to Medusa and blockbuster, then to genie and void is a disjointing (for me). As is the connection between a vagina and Atlantis. I also note the “meaty” description of a vagina is phallic. This causes further confusion for me as a reader i.e. as to your gender identity? There are other images that further lead one to suspect you are writing as a woman… in poetry forums only the poetry matters. Your draft is packed full of potential.