Teaching Patti

[Laurel]

Hi gang... This is a new board, so I thought I'd break it in by saying that "Teaching Patti" is definitely one of my favorites. Apparently I'm not alone in my feelings, as it's been consistently #1 in our Top 10.

 

[Guest]

Thanks, Laurel!

This seems like a good time to thank everyone for all the e-mail I've received about my story, "Teaching Patti". It's been great fun to read your comments and thoughts.

Love the bulletin board, Laurel. Good luck with all the new changes.

Dixon

 

[SkibumKU]

definitely one of my favorites also. Maybe you could come up with another series that is along the same lines.

 

[Guest]

Many people have asked me to either continue the story or write another of its kind. One person had an interesting suggestion, that I write a story with a now older Patti and a younger student, and do a sort of reverse "Teaching Patti". I have another high school story in mind -- a quasi sci-fi thing where a man goes back to high school in the 70s, in his teenage body, but with all the experience and savy of a 90s adult, and his adventurous with all the girls (and teachers) he was too shy or too awkward to approach the first time around. Right now I'm halfway through another piece based an East Village girl I knew in New York (Patti, too, was based on someone I knew). I hope to post it sometime soon (though I'm very busy with other writing projects presently -- erotica is fun, but I gotta' eat). Thanks again to all.

Dixon C. Lee

 

[Guest]

I think a reverse Patti would be a great idea
Those were excellent stories.

 

[Danielle]

Okay i was finally able to take the time to read this story and must agree......awsome beyond belif.....it was totally worth the hour it took for me to read it....Loved it and i think the idea about the sci-fi "teaching patti* thing is awsome (sorry im not into older woman younger man thing lol) go with it.........your a great writer keep it up

 

[Guest]

i really loved the teaching patti stories but and would love to see more along the same lines. The sci-fi idea seems great go with it.

 

[Guest]

After a few minutes of rubbing she stopped, moved her hand to the waist band, and placed a finger inside my underwear. I held my breath. I needed her to touch me very badly, and I didn't want to scare her off, so I tried not to move.

She hesitated, then said, very casually, "Do you think it's going to be a good show?"

She was doing that nervous teenager thing of pretending the sex is not really happening. In high school I'd talk about anything, the weather, classes, anything, while fingering some girl. Somehow small talk made everything seem okay. So I answered Patti as casually as I could. "Yeah, if everyone learns the songs, it should be a good show."
(Excerpt from Teaching Patti)


That’s just simply tremendous. That’s REAL writing. Just blasting out naughty words and demeanor doesn’t cut it for me. THIS does. It says to me the writer was totally inside the moment and exploring it all as it went.
That is so impressive for you to not only think of that, but write it down as well. It adds a lot of realism, and some tension even. As with the rest of this story’s theme – you’ve really got me inside both the man’s and the woman’s mind. And I want her so very badly. So badly want her to slide that hand further beneath my underwear…….

Excellent writing. I thought I might point out something others may not. It was noticed. Nice job, eh.

Xxplorher

 

[DCL]

I loved being quoted. Thank you so much.

The sexiest organ is the brain, and if you can turn the mind on the body will follow. I love to read stories that take the time to place you in the moment. I hoped to do that with "Patti", and I'm glad to have succeeded. Thank you for noticing.

And thanks to all above. You've encouraged me to work on the sci-fi thing, when I can. I'm still finishing a story called "Jazzy Girl" that I like, and will post it one of these months. I'm very busy with an indie film that's going to be produced this winter (my first produced screenplay -- Yipee), so I work on it when I can (I just hope I don't confuse the two and hand in the wrong pages to my producer).

DCL

 

[Guest]

DCL,

No doubt! The proof is right here, eh? I can't speak for everyone, but the only hand involved when I'm reading these stories is my own. Now, it's a nice large hand, very comfortable - no calluses but for the finger tips. But I serously doubt it's the feeling of it alone that gets the blood pumping.
It's the mentality I succumb to or sink myself inside of when I'm 'reading' a story.

And certainly, during the real thing, my mind is spinning. And I'm using it to my advantage to please her. How you go about it mentally is everything. And that's how you discover ultimate pleasure.

I'm just beginning to get my stories posted here as well. You may notice I put a premium on the mental aspect. (At least I hope so : P)

Xxplorher

PS I've got some words for you regarding your Screenplay. Small world, but I just finished my first. Would be most grateful for any advice you can offer on 'exposing myself' Hehehe
See Email

 

[DCL]

Haven't received any e-mail lately. I'm at DCL@Literotica.org. I'll be happy to tell you what I can.

Dixon

 

[Zoda]

I know this thread has been going a while but i just had to write.

I've been visiting this site for a few months and somehow had overlooked the "Teaching Patti" story, after reading the praise of it in this thread i took the time and read it, wow.

The only thing wrong was that it had to end, but even this was done with such class that it didn't leave me too disappointed.

Thanx DCL for a great story.

 

[Dante]

Wow... Just got done reading "Teaching Patti" and I'm actually saddened by the ending and the fact that it ended at all. It takes quite a story for that to happen to me.

The only problem I found in "Teaching Patti" was that in Chapter III, when Patti first came downstairs, Mark noted she wasn't wearing underwear. Soon after in the story though, the panties play a large part. Not sure if I missed something or if this was just a small oversight.

Either way, it's an absolutely amazing story. I'm working on my first story now, no telling when I might finish it though.

 

[DCL]

Dante,

You're right about that little continuity slip-up. There are actually one or two others, and some typos, all of which I've corrected, and maybe I'll ask Laurel to replace the old version with the new one day. That mistake and the others have prompted me to be very careful as I work on my next piece, JAZZY GIRL, which should be finished this week. The problem is that with everything else I write I have editors and proofreaders -- but not so with "Teaching Patti", which I have not shared with family and friends and industry associates, so I had to rely on just me alone, and writers are too close to their works to be properly critical when it comes to anything, including format. So, an occasional "oops" is bound to happen. Glad you liked the stories. Watch out for JAZZY GIRL.

Dixon Carter Lee