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slipfreak46

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I am writing a story and need some help. The story (actually the latest chapter) concerns the main character being used by his "evil step sister" as a teaching aid for teaching her new girlfriend the art of a good blow job.

He is not to have too much fun so he needs to be "restrained". She wants to be thorough so there is to be much teasing and denial with maybe some surprise tricks.

I am afraid I do not have the "experience" to write this portion of the story (no, I really don't want to learn that), so I am in search of an "experienced" woman who would like to teach her friend.

Let me know if you are interested and I will fill in any details you may want.
 
try the "How To" forum, and " How To" stories. Both have useful tips.
 
sirhugs said:
try the "How To" forum, and " How To" stories. Both have useful tips.
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People over at the How To forum just directed him here, hehe. :D




Oh, and it's a bit confusing as to what you actually want. Are you looking for someone to give you suggestions as to what to write? Or are you looking for someone to write a portion of the story for you?

Also, I'm unsure as to how lack of experience plays in here as well. I would say that there are many stories on lit where people have little or no real life experience with the subject (e.g. incest, nonconsent) and still manage to write what they fantasize.
 
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bisexplicit said:
People over at the How To forum just directed him here, hehe. :D




Oh, and it's a bit confusing as to what you actually want. Are you looking for someone to give you suggestions as to what to write? Or are you looking for someone to write a portion of the story for you?

Also, I'm unsure as to how lack of experience plays in here as well. I would say that there are many stories on lit where people have little or no real life experience with the subject (e.g. incest, nonconsent) and still manage to write what they fantasize.
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bisexplicit;

You noticed that too, huh?

As for the lack of experience, I was referring to the act itself. Seems to me that this portion needs to be written by someone who would know how to teach. Having been only on the recieving end and not all that often, don't think I have the knowledge base. Writing about incest is a little easier, cause that is just two family members having sex (no intent to minimize the impact of incest here. Please don't flame me). From that aspect, seduction is seduction. What I am looking for here is some teaching of technique.

Ok, I will be blunt. I think what is needed here is someone who is experienced enough giving blow jobs and orgasm denial to teach someone how to do it ("hold the cock like this, cup his sacks with your other hand and gently kneed them, you can tell when he is getting close to cumming because...., stop this before you get to this point, etc), preferably female.

The first part of this chapter is already written. The two girls have fun and let step brother watch. The next part is where step-sister decides to teach the newbie how to do it. And remember, the overall theme is "Cruel Intentions.
 
I bet you could manage to write it with imput from others here - if you wanted.

Because, if I'm not mistaken, a lot of what you're looking for is teasing, right? You could simply ask for people to list what sort of techniques they use to tease their partner during a blow job. And as for denial, that part isn't too difficult either - when his breathing gets heavy and ragged, and his balls begin to tighten, the girl can either pull away, or clamp her hand on the base of his cock (acting sortof like a cock ring).

I hope that helps some. :)
 
bisexplicit said:
I bet you could manage to write it with imput from others here - if you wanted.

Because, if I'm not mistaken, a lot of what you're looking for is teasing, right? You could simply ask for people to list what sort of techniques they use to tease their partner during a blow job. And as for denial, that part isn't too difficult either - when his breathing gets heavy and ragged, and his balls begin to tighten, the girl can either pull away, or clamp her hand on the base of his cock (acting sortof like a cock ring).

I hope that helps some. :)
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Well, lets see if that works.

What do you say, lady readers? Give me some suggestions.
 
When in doubt, write from your fantasies. :) Do you think you'd enjoy teasing and orgasm denial? If so, what do you fantasize about? How do you see it happening? Can you imagine the feelings you'd endure when you're so close to cumming from your "favorite" orgasm to suddenly have the sensation stop?
 
Hallowed Eve said:
When in doubt, write from your fantasies. :) Do you think you'd enjoy teasing and orgasm denial? If so, what do you fantasize about? How do you see it happening? Can you imagine the feelings you'd endure when you're so close to cumming from your "favorite" orgasm to suddenly have the sensation stop?
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You are a deliciously cruel mistress. Would you really do that to me?
 
slipfreak46 said:
You are a deliciously cruel mistress. Would you really do that to me?
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Heh, Hallowed Eve can obviously speak for herself, but I'm not quite sure she was offering to do it to you...
 
bisexplicit said:
Heh, Hallowed Eve can obviously speak for herself, but I'm not quite sure she was offering to do it to you...
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Perhaps my imagination was running away with me. No offense intended.
 
bisexplicit said:
Heh, Hallowed Eve can obviously speak for herself, but I'm not quite sure she was offering to do it to you...
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but the image was delicious
 
those that can't teach

I'm confused. slipfreak writes that the teaching part should come from a writer who is "preferably female" and that he doesn't have the knowledgebase to be able to teach. I have two comments about that.

The first is that writing is an act of imagination and the good writers here can tell stories from the viewpoint of either gender. I actually find it easier to write from the female perspective sometimes. If I'm doing it right then the reader should begin to question whether I'm really a guy or a girl masquerading as a guy.

The second is that I see no reason why the receiver of a teasing blowjob wouldn't have the "knowledgebase" to write from the perspective of the teacher. On the contrary I would think that the receiver would have even more "knowledge" about the steps and feelings and emotions that would go into this storyline.

I think it's a challenge that slipfreak should think about taking on himself. Look over some of the How-To stories. Search for "tease" (currently there are 486 stories to choose from) and away you go...
 
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