Tanka Very Much!

[Guest]

Tanka - syllable based poem, 5 lines, 5.7.5.7.7.

Themes - sex, love, perving, romance - please!

Please start your tanka with the last word of the previous tanka.

Torso impressive
burned upon my inflamed brain
sweet thoughts flickering.
Your image, so very hot
is not what I want, right now.

Start next tanka with "Now"

easy peasy and lots of fun!

 

[Trinique_Fire]

i never liked tankas...but sheesh. honoring my haiku thread, i'll post a tanka

 

[Trinique_Fire]

Tanka - syllable based poem, 5 lines, 5.7.5.7.7.

Themes - sex, love, perving, romance - please!

Please start your tanka with the last word of the previous tanka.

Torso impressive
burned upon my inflamed brain
sweet thoughts flickering.
Your image, so very hot
is not what I want, right now.

Start next tanka with "Now"

easy peasy and lots of fun!

now the sun sets low
delicate fingers touching
nipples. peach delight
blooming flower, salmon pink
petals open, sweet nectar

 

[Guest]

i never liked tankas...but sheesh. honoring my haiku thread, i'll post a tanka

I apologise if this has been done before - I should have ckecked first. *blush*

Something I used to enjoy doing on another board.

ooohh - that's lovely, Trinique!

Mine are not so elegant.

 

[Trinique_Fire]

I apologise if this has been done before - I should have ckecked first. *blush*

Something I used to enjoy doing on another board.

ooohh - that's lovely, Trinique!

Mine are not so elegant.

it hasn't been. i made a haiku thread ages ago. all you did was keep with tradition. my tanka made you want me, didn't it?

 

[Guest]

it hasn't been. i made a haiku thread ages ago. all you did was keep with tradition. my tanka made you want me, didn't it?

Well - I have to say that I'm more inclined to your title and location lines myself..

But yeah. A sexy mind is always atrractive, not matter what the sex.

Nectar, crystalline,
drops of hunger apparent
appear magically.
When spelling me, effortless -
You power is absolute.

 

[Trinique_Fire]

Well - I have to say that I'm more inclined to your title and location lines myself..

But yeah. A sexy mind is always atrractive, not matter what the sex.

Nectar, crystalline,
drops of hunger apparent
appear magically.
When spelling me, effortless -
You power is absolute.

good tanka. i'm horny now.

in regards to sexy mind/sex comment....i'm a lesbian..... lol

 

[Guest]

good tanka. i'm horny now.

in regards to sexy mind/sex comment....i'm a lesbian..... lol

LMAO (at myself)
Well - I'm a blonde - nice to meet you Trinique!

 

[Trinique_Fire]

LMAO (at myself)
Well - I'm a blonde - nice to meet you Trinique!

you too

now, how do i get one'a them little buttons like you've got?

 

[Guest]

you too

now, how do i get one'a them little buttons like you've got?

I was born with it? *giggle* couldn't resist.

code is:



pretty simple, text only - I don't know how to decorate it.

hope it works for you!

 

[bronzeage]

Well - I have to say that I'm more inclined to your title and location lines myself..

But yeah. A sexy mind is always atrractive, not matter what the sex.

Nectar, crystalline,
drops of hunger apparent
appear magically.
When spelling me, effortless -
You power is absolute.

Absolute power,
ground pounding thunder rattles
the windows and curls
the shades, only we hear the noise,
the unaware pass by in quiet.

 

[Guest]

I guess I'llhave to play with myself

Until someone else comes along..

Absolute, my love
for you I am besotted,
infatuated,
guided by Eros' flame
nurtured by sweet Agape.

 

[Guest]

Absolute power,
ground pounding thunder rattles
the windows and curls
the shades, only we hear the noise,
the unaware pass by in quiet.

(that last one sucked anyways, mine, that is)

Quietly, softly
swift fingers spell their intent
in Braille upon flesh
The question asked, soon answered
In the clarity of script.

 

[bronzeage]

Until someone else comes along..

Absolute, my love
for you I am besotted,
infatuated,
guided by Eros' flame
nurtured by sweet Agape.

Agape, my mouth hangs
at this sight, magenta and peach,
my burning pulse fires
the boiler, to the breaking,
to leave more agape as well.

 

[Guest]

*giggle*

OK - all together now..

you go with script - I'm challenged today..

 

[bronzeage]

(that last one sucked anyways, mine, that is)

Quietly, softly
swift fingers spell their intent
in Braille upon flesh
The question asked, soon answered
In the clarity of script.

Script and direction
are unneeded on our stage.
A love in three acts,
players in a natural
role, born to play the love scene.

 

[Guest]

Script and direction
are unneeded on our stage.
A love in three acts,
players in a natural
role, born to play the love scene.

Scene set with roses,
stage outfitted in flannel,
the candles are lit.
Soft, dim and sweetly smelling
the play's about to begin.

 

[Aurora Black]

Ooh, sexy new people!

 

[Guest]

Ooh, sexy new people!

Why thank you darlin'! I was just going to say the same thing. *grin*

So - got something for us?

 

[bronzeage]

Scene set with roses,
stage outfitted in flannel,
the candles are lit.
Soft, dim and sweetly smelling
the play's about to begin.

Curtains and skirts are
raised to reveal white thighs to
the audience, who
rises to aplaud before
the performance has begun.

 

[Guest]

Curtains and skirts are
raised to reveal white thighs to
the audience, who
rises to aplaud before
the performance has begun.

Begun on parchment
trancended to electron
yes - the play's the thing
Romeo and Juliet
never had a chance, poor things.

 

[Aurora Black]

Why thank you darlin'! I was just going to say the same thing. *grin*

So - got something for us?

Mind if I take a raincheck? Sorry to cut and run, but I'm starting a new story today.

 

[Guest]

Mind if I take a raincheck? Sorry to cut and run, but I'm starting a new story today.

Please come on back!

 

[Aurora Black]

Please come on back!

I will. It was lovely to meet you.

 

[Salvor-Hardon]

Things about her I love
The way she laughs and then smiles
Her elegant grace
Wit, charm and of course her
Sensuality