Talk Dirty to Me

carsonshepherd

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Seriously, I need some inspiration for a hot, down-and-dirty talk session in this story. Help me out, 'cause so far I'm just not feeling it.
 
Okay, so you're licking my balls...

:cool:

How's going carson, save for the writing difficulty (though isn't there always one, for all of us?)?

Q_C
 
How about -

Hot water from the shower pounding onto naked skin - slickery suds, sliding and groping and teasing and toying hands and fingers. That breathless sensation when you're on your knees sucking, almost drowning from the water flow and the size of him in your mouth -

Where was I?
 
carsonshepherd said:
Seriously, I need some inspiration for a hot, down-and-dirty talk session in this story. Help me out, 'cause so far I'm just not feeling it.
Is this phone sex or talk during sex?
*dials Carson's number*
 
sweetsubsarahh said:
How about -

Hot water from the shower pounding onto naked skin - slickery suds, sliding and groping and teasing and toying hands and fingers. That breathless sensation when you're on your knees sucking, almost drowning from the water flow and the size of him in your mouth -

Where was I?

Hey, who told you what I did last weekend?

:D
 
OhMissScarlett said:
Is this phone sex or talk during sex?
*dials Carson's number*
He leaned his head closer to mine against the back seat. “I can wait,” he whispered, a breath in my ear. “But can you?”and his eyes dropped to my lap where the outline of my hard cock showed against the top of my thigh.

“You know,” he kept on, soft and relentless, “the first thing I noticed about you when I saw you was your smile, laughing at something your friend said. I kept looking up at you to see if you were smiling again. I was drawn to your lips… the way you licked them after you took a drink of your beer…”

This made me blush and I kind of laughed, staring down while his breath brushed my cheek.

“And you turned around and stared at me, up and down before I looked up. Oh yeah,” he laughed softly, “I knew the whole time. You were so sexy when you blushed liked that, I wanted to drag you to the john and bend you over the sink but didn’t think I’d see you again… which would have been a shame. It would’ve been a shame because I kept looking at your lips and thinking what they could do to me… kissing down my chest and my belly and wrapping around my cock…”

A gasping squeak came from me. I couldn’t help it. His words were getting to me no matter how I tried to fight it. I was the man of steel, dammit, and he was melting me into a puddle without a single touch. Just a low, husky, slightly southern whisper in my ear under the eyes of the cabbie who was plainly worried about what might happen in his back seat.

“I think your lips would be pretty around my cock,” Daniel whispered and my belly clenched, abs flexing in an effort not to rub myself against my jeans. My hands balled up into fists in my jacket pocket as he kept on and I shivered from h is husky voice in my ear.

“I want to see you lick my balls because I love that. Then I want to watch you lick my cock up and down while you unbutton your pants and play with yourself.”

I gasped without meaning to. Dammit. My cock ached and he grinned at my stricken look, my hungry breath. He was enjoying this. My fidgetting was uncontrollable and I raked my fingers through my fair. His laugh caught me in the gut.

“Yeah, do that, ‘cause that’s what I’ll be doing while you’re sucking the head of my dick… I’ll be tugging on your hair and making you moan. You’ll like that, won’t you? Having your hair pulled?”

His own breath was getting jerky as he kept up his barrage of images.

“Oh yeah… I love watching someone who really loves sucking cock. You get this look on your face, you know that? I love looking down there and seeing that look, seeing your eyes looking up at me while my cock is down your throat. But know what else I like?”

There was a pause and I closed my eyes and gulped a breath. I shuddered. But this time, he didn’t keep on. He stopped and waited. I opened my eyes and saw he was waiting for me to ask him what he liked. I swallowed and licked my dry lips. It wasn’t easy for me to say things like this.

“What?” I finally breathed in the barest whisper.

A slow grin spread over his face and he glanced at the cabbie, then leaned close to my ear so that we were touching, his arm against mine, our thighs touching. How long had it been since someone seduced me?

“I love watching, but I like doing it, too. I’d like to flip you over and lick you, taste you because I know you’ll be so sweet… so hard and ready for me…”

Oh my God I groaned and I was almost sure I’d said it aloud but then the cab came to a stop and when I looked up I realised we were sitting in front of my house and the cabbie was staring at us, waiting for his money.

Fuck.

I fumbled for my wallet and shoved him what I hoped was enough cash as I threw open the door and tumbled out with Daniel behind me and we almost ran up the front stairs, his hands tugging at my clothes while I fitted the keys to the lock.

The door slammed closed and my back hit the wall of the dark foyer and his mouth crashed into mine, demanding lips and rough stubble and a soft, utterly delicious tongue invading my mouth, tasting me while I wound my hands in his soft damp hair - mist of rain like a spiderweb - and pulled him down, licking and sucking fiercely at his bottom lip. Yeah, bruise him, make him sore and tender, swollen from sucking me.
 
Um, so what's the problem? Other than me needing to go lock myself in the bathroom with Johan for about a half an hour?
 
OhMissScarlett said:
Um, so what's the problem? Other than me needing to go lock myself in the bathroom with Johan for about a half an hour?



*raises eyebrow*


Johan? Is that what you're calling it these days?
 
Celtic Princess said:
You should not name them. Like farm animals, you might get too attached and not want to give them up later.


:D


LOL. i've grown rather attached to mine....
 
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