Taking Advantage

[BBWetKitty]

Hello, completely new to this forum. Thought I would share. I hope this is the right place for this.

ah to rest my head against your chest, that would be nice
I want to take your right hand and kiss your palm
trace your lifeline with my tongue and lightly bite each finger

blindfold you...and have my way with licks and kisses...

you sitting in the chair like that.
my captive.
no bounds... you move, its over..
your self-control your gauge

my lips on your ear.. whispering delicious things Im going to do
my fingers gliding under that shirt

nails gliding up and down your chest
breasts resting against your head

I want to make you growl

I want to make your stomach jump like lightening is running thru it

I want to hear your breathing change....
to rub my thumb on your bottom lip and have you suck it in..

my fingertips grazing your waistline...
watching your hands grasp the arms of the chair
my fingers easing your zipper down...
lips on your stomach
tongue grazing your bellybutton
hand sliding inside... grasping you..

That my dear, is how Id take advantage...

lay a soft kiss upon my lips so I might keep breathing...

place a gentle hand upon my body so I might know you're real

let me feel the rough grain of your goatee upon my breast so I can know your urgency

press your ear upon my breast to verify your effect on my being
press your lips upon my breastbone so I may peer in your eyes
feel my nails graze your back to demostrate my lust


my heat, my core, burns for you

Wrote that last night after being heavily inspired...

 

[WickedEve]

Wrote that last night after being heavily inspired...

Yes, that kind of inspiration can produce much poetry. But when you're no longer under the influence of lust, that's a good time to really shape a poem up.

 

[impressive]

But when you're no longer under the influence of lust ...

Third Tuesday of odd numbered months from 3:00am to 3:15am. Mark your calendar.

 

[BBWetKitty]

Thank you Wicked Eve for the subtle hint.

 

[WickedEve]

Thank you Wicked Eve for the subtle hint.

No. Just a tip. I do it myself. I get excited and write. But once I calm down, I find little improvements here and there. It's the same thing with writing while you're upset. You get all that frustration or sorrow out. But you should always consider an edit once your focus is no longer entirely on the sorrow or lust or whatever powerful emotion drove you to write.

 

[The_Fool]

No. Just a tip. I do it myself. I get excited and write. But once I calm down, I find little improvements here and there. It's the same thing with writing while you're upset. You get all that frustration or sorrow out. But you should always consider an edit once your focus is no longer entirely on the sorrow or lust or whatever powerful emotion drove you to write.

Agreed. So why don't I do it more often?

 

[BBWetKitty]

No. Just a tip. I do it myself. I get excited and write. But once I calm down, I find little improvements here and there. It's the same thing with writing while you're upset. You get all that frustration or sorrow out. But you should always consider an edit once your focus is no longer entirely on the sorrow or lust or whatever powerful emotion drove you to write.

I understand that. I did go thru that process when I wrote my other poem (which is linked).

 

[WickedEve]

I understand that. I did go thru that process when I wrote my other poem (which is linked).

I clicked on the top link. That's not a poem.
Okay, I found the poem. I'm going to read it now.

 

[WickedEve]

Yes, I can tell that Silver Dawn is polished. Very nice poem.

 

[BBWetKitty]

I clicked on the top link. That's not a poem.
Okay, I found the poem. I'm going to read it now.

Oohh, yes, well... uhm... no, its not a poem, but I do have good cadence when necessary.

Thanks for reading my poem. I wrote that about 10 years ago. What I wrote last night was the first time Id put pen to paper since then.

 

[WickedEve]

What I wrote last night was the first time Id put pen to paper since then.

Not a bad start. Now you need to write, write, write! During the last few years of my marriage, I didn't get to drive. So, when he left and I finally got my own car, it took awhile for me to become a really good driver again. (but don't ask me about my parking problems.) I guess it can be the same for poetry.

 

[sandspike]

Hi Kitty

I have noticed your work on another thread. I loved it! I really like the 2nd
poem and I don't know a damn thing about dawn or horses.

 

[BBWetKitty]

I have noticed your work on another thread. I loved it! I really like the 2nd
poem and I don't know a damn thing about dawn or horses.

Thank you very much sandspike. I appreciate the kind words.

 

[BBWetKitty]

Not a bad start. Now you need to write, write, write! During the last few years of my marriage, I didn't get to drive. So, when he left and I finally got my own car, it took awhile for me to become a really good driver again. (but don't ask me about my parking problems.) I guess it can be the same for poetry.

I imagine it was very cathartic for you to start 'driving' again. Thank you for your support and encouragement.