Sweetnpetite's "The Stranger"

[openthighs_sarah]

I don't normally read non-consent stories but something compelled me to read this one...

The Stranger, by sweetnpetite

I've only written one story that came close to non-consent, but even then I made it pretty obvious that she was actually in control at all times, no matter how things seemed. I've avoided the category mainly, I think, because my character (it's almost always the same character) usually is so excited about whatever she's doing that the idea of non-consent would never cross her mind.

That said, I really liked sweetnpetite's story. The main character's fear seemed very stylized and self-conscious to me, and that had the effect of making the whole thing seem more like a dark and feverish fantasy than just something dark.

And as a fantasy, it's very hot...

 

[sweetnpetite]

and that had the effect of making the whole thing seem more like a dark and feverish fantasy than just something dark.

And as a fantasy, it's very hot...

That is exaclty how I meant it to come accross, so I am deleriously happy for you to describe it this way! It makes an author so happy when someone not only likes your story, but really "gets it" as well. I'm off to do my happy dance!!!

ps. what compelled you? was it my sig-line?

 

[openthighs_sarah]

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ps. what compelled you? was it my sig-line?

Hell, yes. I read that sig so much that I started to feel rather unsophisticated for not recognizing the quotes.

You really did do a nice job with the story. I hope it generated tons of wonderful feedback (and not just creepy feedback from guys who assumed you wanted to be raped).

 

[sweetnpetite]

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Hell, yes. I read that sig so much that I started to feel rather unsophisticated for not recognizing the quotes.

You really did do a nice job with the story. I hope it generated tons of wonderful feedback (and not just creepy feedback from guys who assumed you wanted to be raped).

Thank you thank you thank you! Haven't really got any creepy feedback. One guy didn't believe that a story like that could realy turn a female on. (He said it sounded more like something from the mind of an 18 year old virgin boy, lol)

Now my txt mssg story did get me a couple of invitations of the "i'd like to be your daddy" type. Nothing too rude though.