LaRascasse
I dream, therefore I am
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In my story, I'm struggling to get a critical piece of information to the reader without resorting to a rather ungainly info dump.
Instead, perhaps it could be salvaged if my protagonist talks to his dead wife at night. It is just the sort of thing he'd (hypothetically) share with her.
As to the act of speaking to someone he used to love who has passed - is it sweet? pathetic? creepy? weird? not something a normal person (even by Literotica standards) would do?
If it is possible, what should the monologue ideally be like?
Instead, perhaps it could be salvaged if my protagonist talks to his dead wife at night. It is just the sort of thing he'd (hypothetically) share with her.
As to the act of speaking to someone he used to love who has passed - is it sweet? pathetic? creepy? weird? not something a normal person (even by Literotica standards) would do?
If it is possible, what should the monologue ideally be like?