Sunstruck wrote a dirty story! Woo-Hoo! Look here!

Dixon Carter Lee said:
You people are making jokes like this didn't really happen. It did. It really, really did. I still have Sunny's panties. I'm wearing them right now. They're tight, and my cock is poking out like Kilroy.

I'm off to the movies...

Ok THAT image is going to stick in my head all day.

I told you no one would believe it. lol

If I'd known you were going to wear them I would have worn a thong!
 
Yeah the Hasty Pudding folk are a weird bunch.

Now lay off Harrison! Like I said, he wasn't even in the movie. lol
 
I'm not done with it yet, but so far it's very good.

Here's my favorite part, if you don't mind: "Instead you shit closer..." *ahem* :eek:

Love the spelling mistakes. LOL!

Really, though, I adore the touches of humor in the story. Great job.
 
April I hate you. LMAO! Ok I really should have waited on the proof read. lol

I should have known my spelling and typos would be far more interesting than my story telling. lol
 
April said:
I'm not done with it yet, but so far it's very good.

Here's my favorite part, if you don't mind: "Instead you shit closer..." *ahem* :eek:

Love the spelling mistakes. LOL!

Really, though, I adore the touches of humor in the story. Great job.



*snickers*

I seen that..
 
sunstruck said:
April I hate you. LMAO! Ok I really should have waited on the proof read. lol

I should have known my spelling and typos would be far more interesting than my story telling. lol


I just have to say.. I'm disappointed that I can't umm read this story in private.

;)

Oh.. I know. I'll print it out and read it later.
 
April said:
I'm not done with it yet, but so far it's very good.

Here's my favorite part, if you don't mind: "Instead you shit closer..." *ahem* :eek:

Love the spelling mistakes. LOL!

Really, though, I adore the touches of humor in the story. Great job.

LOL April!

I saw that typo and I thought I was being all nice by not pointing it out in the thread. :p

Sunstruck, the story was fantabulous anyway.


BTW, you can just ignore the part in the feedback I sent you about the typo. LOL.
 
I enjoyed it and told her so in a PM - and didn't mention the typo at all!! I'm nice like that Sunny!

I can proofread your next story if you want - I use to be a legal secretay in the days before computers and spell check - when we typed everything on a typewriter (ok it wasn't that long ago - maybe 15 years) - and I am real good at proofreading!! I pick up mistakes in almost everything I read!
 
LOL Ok that is a really BAD typo. Anyone know how to fix things like that?
 
I'm not sure, but I think you have to submit a corrected version of the story. You might wanna ask DCL. ;)
 
RawHumor said:
LOL

I hear they're pretty tight. There's even a rumor going around that it was a true story.

I don't know what you are talking about.

Dixon Carter Lee said:
And it's an absolutely true story. Honest.


Besides, he hasn't written a story for Lit in years. Ok if Kate would be kind enough to proof it for me I will submit a corrected file. Worst that can happen is they don't use it. lol
 
Send it to me

I'll proof it and send it back.


I'll give you my email address in a PM.
 
I think she should leave the typo. Kinda like her signature, ya know. ;)

Good story, Sunstruck.
 
estevie said:
I think she should leave the typo. Kinda like her signature, ya know. ;)

Good story, Sunstruck.

Thank you very much. But not THAT typo. LOL
 
Does that mean you want some typos left in - just make sure I get the ones that don't make people point at them and laugh and say "yep, this is definately a Sunstruck story! HAHA"
 
sunstruck said:
Thank you very much. But not THAT typo. LOL

Come on!

I'm sure most had a chuckle when they noticed it. :) There can't be a Sunstruck story without a typo!!!
 
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