Sunrise

[robynwildchild]

Shades of cinnamon
that look like friendship
strewn across
the rainy winter night time sky

internal sunrise.


Shades of leafy crimson
soak in the summer temperature
as if
for the first time realized
love isn't just for one flower to surprise the bee

external sunrise.

 

[flyguy69]

This is very nice, Robyn; I don't know if you are seeking feedback or not.

I'm a little puzzled by your predilection for starting new threads for your poems. Are they pieces under construction, suited for the "progess" thread? Are they spontaneous creations, blurted onto the "passion" thread? Are they polished poems, ready for submission?

Why this venue?

I like your poetry, though

 

[robynwildchild]

i guess i just dont' follow the rules?

This is very nice, Robyn; I don't know if you are seeking feedback or not.

I'm a little puzzled by your predilection for starting new threads for your poems. Are they pieces under construction, suited for the "progess" thread? Are they spontaneous creations, blurted onto the "passion" thread? Are they polished poems, ready for submission?

Why this venue?

I like your poetry, though

no their not under construction... maybe a lil passionate
...i don't know where to submit them? maybe?

i'm used to this other website that i go to where you post a new piece on a new thread everytime.....

thank u

 

[foehn]

no their not under construction... maybe a lil passionate
...i don't know where to submit them? maybe?

i'm used to this other website that i go to where you post a new piece on a new thread everytime.....

thank u

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