Sun Lover's Secret Fear

[sun_lover_61]

Good sick People,

I have just finished writing a story. I had about 50 unfinished ones simmering away. Then I started a new one and finished it in about a day.

Now i feel afraid - very afraid. Any person with a gentle heart want to preview it and provide some feedback before I submit it?

Sun Lover 61

 

[tolyk]

Sure, send it on over

 

[sun_lover_61]

Thanks Tolyk,

Here's an embarrassing question - how do I do that?

Sun Lover 61

 

[ElizabethWest]

Did someone just call us sick?

*looks around*

 

[tolyk]

Copy/paste it into a Private Message

 

[Guest]

Did someone just call us sick?

*looks around*

CJVM!!! LOL

 

[sun_lover_61]

Tolyk,

I don't have it with me right now - but you will get it within 24 hours. Its on my other computer! Thanks a lot, in advance

Sun Lover 61

 

[tolyk]

no worries.

Do you just want an opinion, or do you need an edit?

 

[sun_lover_61]

Tolyk,

Just an opinion in the first instance. What you will see is very much a first draft - so it is not tight.

My real fear is that something I think is erotic will barely raise a grunt in someone else.

No, wait - my real fear is that everything that I find erotic will barely raise a grunt in everybody else!

I guess what I want to hear about is...about the characters. Is it interesting? Does it engage you? Does it conclude satisfactorily? etc

Sun Lover 61

 

[tolyk]

Sure thing

 

[Guest]

Sure thing

Slag!

 

[tolyk]

Slag!

What?