Suggestions for Plotline

[Grushenka]

Practically speaking, since PH is feelthy rich, you can have scenes all over the world, in any number of celebrity homes, on the red carpet, on the web, etc. You could be seduced by celeb wannabes trying to get to her, or you could save her from any number of same.

I won't be reading your story, but good luck.

 

[Grushenka]

Stella Omega: let me take this opportunity to ask about your AV. I'm not current on cartoon creatures. Gru

 

[OhMissScarlett]

*melts* What would you like me to do? Anything... just do that again...

Ooh! Anything? That's like the best offer ever.

 

[WarLordwrites]

Now, now, people. Lay off this guy. He's just trying to act like a "big person" to gain status amoung his "bros" on the playground. Either that or he's on the planet Zepton.

Greetings

We pinned the ole snark-o-meter on this one...


Enjoy the journey

WarLord.

 

[jomar]

Stella Omega: let me take this opportunity to ask about your AV. I'm not current on cartoon creatures. Gru

Stella's the mellow sea turtle dude in Finding Nemo.

 

[Grushenka]

Stella's the mellow sea turtle dude in Finding Nemo.

Thanks, haven't seen that movie.

 

[jomar]

Thanks, haven't seen that movie.

It's cute. Worth watching.

 

[cloudy]

Greetings

We pinned the ole snark-o-meter on this one...


Enjoy the journey

WarLord.

Oh, c'mon...

"For fucks sake first of all I love her second of all I don't do gross shit like BDSM with her third I hate hearing about her and other guys and how bout we all just shut up about the fact it has Paris Hilton"

..just begs for snarky. Leaving Paris Hilton out of it, his complete lack of punctuation and adolescent (not to mention creepy as hell) insistence that he "loves" her just begs for snark.

*shrug*

If he can't play with the big boys and girls, he needs to take his ball and go home.

 

[Foxee Browne]

As much as I dislike Paris Hilton, some others do not. So putting that aside, he could have the 3 girls get into a huge catfight over him. Jealosy and all that. He could have the paparatzi (sorry can't spell it) photograph it and the sex scenes. Nicole tries to steal Paris new BF (the author) in a club. He won't have her and she makes a scene.

Just a few ideas.

 

[WarLordwrites]

Oh, c'mon...

"For fucks sake first of all I love her second of all I don't do gross shit like BDSM with her third I hate hearing about her and other guys and how bout we all just shut up about the fact it has Paris Hilton"

..just begs for snarky. Leaving Paris Hilton out of it, his complete lack of punctuation and adolescent (not to mention creepy as hell) insistence that he "loves" her just begs for snark.

*shrug*

If he can't play with the big boys and girls, he needs to take his ball and go home.

Greetings

Well the "Big Kids" around here write porno seems a stretch to get all uppity because he has Paris in his.

And horrors he can't punctuate...

There goes the neighborhoood!

Nope, I stand by snarky and I see over on the sidelines the "zebra" just threw the flag for piling on

Enjoy the journey

WarLord

 

[Stella_Omega]

Stella's the mellow sea turtle dude in Finding Nemo.

Yeah, I thought mellow would be a nice change

"uh, don't hurl on the shell, dude, i just waxed it"

Ooh! Anything? That's like the best offer ever.

The best offer so far... I aim to improve and, you know... grow...

 

[cloudy]

Greetings

Well the "Big Kids" around here write porno seems a stretch to get all uppity because he has Paris in his.

And horrors he can't punctuate...

There goes the neighborhoood!

Nope, I stand by snarky and I see over on the sidelines the "zebra" just threw the flag for piling on

Enjoy the journey

WarLord

Don't know about you, but I don't write "porno," nor do many of my friends.

It's not that he can't punctuate, but apparently denies it's existence entirely.

Uppity? What-the-fuck-ever. I have a degree in English, I have a right to get "uppity" about the way language is used - I earned it. If you aspire to call yourself an author, then you should, as well, instead of glossing over someone's absolute laziness.

We tend to get snarky when people act like idiots. Deal with it.

 

[Stella_Omega]

As much as I dislike Paris Hilton, some others do not. So putting that aside, he could have the 3 girls get into a huge catfight over him. Jealosy and all that. He could have the paparatzi (sorry can't spell it) photograph it and the sex scenes. Nicole tries to steal Paris new BF (the author) in a club. He won't have her and she makes a scene.

Just a few ideas.

Good ones!
And some simpler one-on-one ideas;
Sex in the swimming pool,
He buys her a puppy (money can't buy love) and she thanks him in a very personal way

fight-and-make-up is always yummy...

 

[Foxee Browne]

Good ones!
And some simpler one-on-one ideas;
Sex in the swimming pool,
He buys her a puppy (money can't buy love) and she thanks him in a very personal way

fight-and-make-up is always yummy...

Thanks Stella, those are good ones too.

 

[Grushenka]

As someone with only 200+ posts, would it be out of line to ask Cloudy and the Warlord to take their personal bickering elsewhere? Isn't it what's called a threadjack?

I don't know FallenMorgan but it seemed he was simply asking for some writerly aid. I have no interest whatsoever in Ms. Hilton, but I know just enough about her to have come up with my above suggestions.

Sincerely, Gru

 

[cloudy]

As someone with only 200+ posts, would it be out of line to ask Cloudy and the Warlord to take their personal bickering elsewhere? Isn't it what's called a threadjack?

I don't know FallenMorgan but it seemed he was simply asking for some writerly aid. I have no interest whatsoever in Ms. Hilton, but I know just enough about her to have come up with my above suggestions.

Sincerely, Gru

No problem. I've put him on ignore, anyway.

I'm out.

 

[Stella_Omega]

No problem. I've put him on ignore, anyway.

I'm out.

See why I love her?

Anyway, back to the topic- Think about alternating chapters, so that one has big public glamour sex, and the next one has tender, intimate, just you and her sex. The contrast could be very hot...

 

[jomar]

See why I love her?

Anyway, back to the topic- Think about alternating chapters, so that one has big public glamour sex, and the next one has tender, intimate, just you and her sex. The contrast could be very hot...

And you have to break up and date other celebrities and the tabloids have a field day and fuel the anger and bitterness before you somehow find each other again. Wait, that's too much like reality. Sorry.

 

[Stella_Omega]

And you have to break up and date other celebrities and the tabloids have a field day and fuel the anger and bitterness before you somehow find each other again. Wait, that's too much like reality. Sorry.

sounds like a best-seller, once you've changed all the names...

See, this guy won't be wasting his time, it's all practice. He could be the next Roman a' clef novelist! *nods*

 

[bluebell]

She's right, dammit.

Don't know about you, but I don't write "porno," nor do many of my friends.

It's not that he can't punctuate, but apparently denies it's existence entirely.

Uppity? What-the-fuck-ever. I have a degree in English, I have a right to get "uppity" about the way language is used - I earned it. If you aspire to call yourself an author, then you should, as well, instead of glossing over someone's absolute laziness.

We tend to get snarky when people act like idiots. Deal with it.

*Falls prostrate at Cloudy's feet*
You are the best. Ever.