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I'm currently writing my first story for Lit and I'm a bit stuck on creating a fitting title. The story is about an 18 year old, high school senior who attends a Halloween party with his mom, who is a total milf. Later, his mom disappears from the party and he begins searching the house for her and eventually finds her, but much to his dismay, she's sucking off 3 of his classmates and he watches. Since it's October, I decided on the Halloween theme, but I might add more chapters later on, so I don't want a title that connects to Halloween. Story elements are voyeurism, cuckold son, busty, blonde milf, interracial, all the guys are African-American and blowbang.

I'm drawing blanks right now, so feel free to make suggestions. The story is still in progress, so no rush.
 
Simon's Rule No. 1 of a Mom-Son incest story: It must have "Mom" or "Mother" in the title. Usually, "Mom" works better for the tone.

Gonzo, ridiculous titles work for these stories. Descriptiveness works too. So do obviously sexy, titillating words. The people looking for these stories are not looking for the most subtle stories in the world and anyone looking for a subtle story is probably not the right audience for your story concept, based on how you've described it.

How about:

"Cock-Sucking Party Mom."

Or if you want a verb:

"Mom Sucks Cock At The Halloween Party." You cover all the relevant bases and it's a sentence in active voice, too.

This is NOT a story concept that calls for subtlety or nuance. Don't overthink it. Grab the reader by the balls, so to speak.
 
SimonDoom said:
Simon's Rule No. 1 of a Mom-Son incest story: It must have "Mom" or "Mother" in the title. Usually, "Mom" works better for the tone.

Gonzo, ridiculous titles work for these stories. Descriptiveness works too. So do obviously sexy, titillating words. The people looking for these stories are not looking for the most subtle stories in the world and anyone looking for a subtle story is probably not the right audience for your story concept, based on how you've described it.

How about:

"Cock-Sucking Party Mom."

Or if you want a verb:

"Mom Sucks Cock At The Halloween Party." You cover all the relevant bases and it's a sentence in active voice, too.

This is NOT a story concept that calls for subtlety or nuance. Don't overthink it. Grab the reader by the balls, so to speak.
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While I don't always agree with the "Grab them by the balls" approach when it comes to story titles, in this instance I will fully endorse this approach, especially given the nature of the story outlined.

The OP isn't writing some nuanced love story here. It's a full blown sex farce, and they should embrace that with the title for sure.
 
Djmac1031 said:
While I don't always agree with the "Grab them by the balls" approach when it comes to story titles, in this instance I will fully endorse this approach, especially given the nature of the story outlined.

The OP isn't writing some nuanced love story here. It's a full blown sex farce, and they should embrace that with the title for sure.
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Agreed. It all depends on the story and its tone. The title should succeed in capturing the attention of the most fit audience for your story. OP wants an audience looking to read about son watching mom getting blowbanged at a Halloween party.
 
The party may very well be nothing more than an inciting incident. If the story continues and the rest of the encounters don't involve a party, then including that in the title doesn't really fit.

"Mom Seeking a Son Rise" maybe. Really like that turn of phrase.
 
RejectReality said:
The party may very well be nothing more than an inciting incident. If the story continues and the rest of the encounters don't involve a party, then including that in the title doesn't really fit.

"Mom Seeking a Son Rise" maybe. Really like that turn of phrase.
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If Mom's blowbang by three guys at the Halloween party is just the start, that's some hell of a mom story.
 
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