Succubus

RoseThorn

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OOC: Ok, this is a private thread for Renegade and I, we're trying something, so watch and comment if you like.

IC:
Rose Thorn sighed as she sipped her drink. She hated these noisy loud clubs. Hated the new music. Hated the smells some children brought in...But she loved the Game.

An old succubus she had enjoyed the Game for centuries. Sipping her life's blood from the passion of those she took. Leaving them thinking it was naught but a dream for a lonely night...

She wore a loose black tee and jeans, which conformed to her shape despite the loosness, not often enough for the group standing near her. Her long raven hair fell across deep black eyes and pale as moonlight skin. Her eyes scanned the room. Her breath caught softly, as it rarly did now days, as she stared at her chosen...
 
John

Taking a small sip from my drink, I look around the large club for some action. Any action would be good at this point of this evening. This looked like it was going to be just another waste of a good day. Just like all the other times that I've come to this place.

So far, I've gotten four girls laugh in my face, three slaps to the face, two drinks thrown into my face, and a knee to the groin from that lesbian. Not like I was able to tell her apart from the straight girls or anything like that.

I was getting ready to leave when, just at that moment, I felt something. Something like the feeling that I was being watched by someone. As the music played on and the people danced, I ignored that all as I began to scan around for any sign of what was drawing my attention.

Then, I saw her in the far side of the club. She was alone near a table with a drink in her hand as her gaze met mine. The woman looked great in what she was wearing. It seemed very odd that such an attractive person would be alone in a pick up joint like this one. Also, there was something about her that made me cringe at first, but soon I felt another feeling. I had to go talk with her now.

Taking what was left of my drink, I slowly made my way to where she was waiting. Moving past those around me, I finaly make it to her as I nervously try to act casual. Walking up to her, I ask in a low voice "Are.. are you here alone... or are you here with somebody?" I realised how dumb I must have sounded, but I just never did have luck making a first impression with women.
 
Rose

Rose smiled at John, licking her lips.

"No...I'm quite alone, but looking for companey..." She smiled.

"This may a bit forward, but would you like to go to my place for coffee or something...? I really hate this music..."
 
John

Feeling somewhat uncomftable, yet also at ease in her presence, I consider her offer. This place was too loud for us to realy get into any type of conversation. Not that I was truly paying attention to the noise anymore that I was talking to her now. Why was I feeling like this about someone who I had just met less then a minute ago? It just didn't seem like something a rational thinking person would be doing.

Forgetting about that for now, I look into her deep eyes as the answer to her question suddenly seems very obvious. "I'd.. love to go with you to you're place for a drink." I tell her as I feel her eyes look deep into my soul.

With a saucy wink, she leads the way out of the club. Following her, I glance down to see her tight bottom for a brief moment. The last thing I wanted was to risk her catching me gawking at her like some pervert teenager. Especialy since I was still a virgin in my early 20's. Where does the time fly?
 
Rose

Rose hailed a cab, smiling as his gaze roamed over her. She couldn't help but lick her lips again. He seemed... innocent. She smiled at him and motioned him in the cab.

It didn't take long to get to her place and the silance was a bit uncomfortable. She could almost hear his worry. She let her hand touch his knee, slowly moving up his thigh, leaving no doubt of her intentions. The cab stopped then and she paid, tugging his hand, she pulled him into the lobby of the hotel she lived in.

Rose ignored the smirking doorman and led the young man to the elevator, pushing the top floor, her penthouse, she smiled at him and pulled him down for a kiss, licking the inside of his startled nouth, she almost moaned at the sweet taste...She pulled back to smirk at him.

"By the way...I'm Rose..." I murmured as the elevator door opened.
 
John

Taken by surprise from her sudden kiss, I quickly let myself fall into the moment before she breaks the embrace. As she breaks the kiss to talk, I can barely make out what she says to me. But I am able to here that her name is Rose. What a lovely name for such a lovely young woman I thought.

Trying to be polite, I tell her in a slightly nervous voice "Hmm... uh... my name is... uh... what was it... oh yeah, John. My name is John." Oh yeah you handled that very slick didn't you Romeo? Rose's eyes meet mine again as she seems to be more interested in me now after that showing of nervousness.

Following her out of the elevator, I keep my eyes locked onto her sexy body as we made it to her place. Once we enter her penthouse, I take a quick look around as she closes the door behind us. Turning to face her, I notice her smile as she walks towards me. There was something about this woman that just seemed different. But at the moment, I wasn't going to complain about any of that.
 
Rose

Keeping up the show, and prolonging the sweet torture. I walk in the kitchen, letting him take in the many erotic works of art around the room.

"I'm making tea..." I say, when I feel his presense in the kitchen doorway.

"I've always liked tea..." I continue, arranging a tray with cups, sugar and cream.

"The warm rush of liquid in your throat...the first heated taste...Quite...Relaxing, don't you think?"
 
John

Standing there, my mouth slightly open, I simply nod my head in approval at her question. She gives me a sexy smile as she continues to sort out everything that is needed for the tea. Watching her as she does this, I begin to feel myself become more aroused by her saucy movements. It was odd that something so simple as making tea, could appear so seductive when done in a certain way.

Trying to make some small talk, I ask her "So how long have you been living in this place? Have you been here very long?"

As I await her responce, I begin to notice that many of the arts she had around here were rather old looking. Like they had been around for many, many years. Rose must be very well off to be able to afford this place and all of these items. She could probably have anyone that she wanted at anytime with such beauty and wealth. Made me begin to wonder what she could possibly want from someone like me.
 
Rose

"I...have been here a long time..." I murmur, looking away. I smile and nod at the works.

"Do you like them? Some find them amusing...Others embarressing...I find them quite erotic. It's a hobby of mine. I enjoy collecting art where the participants enjoy the act of sex for no other reason then sex itself..."

I pick up the tray, moving past him into my living room. I sit the tea on the coffee table and slide onto my leather love seat. I pat the cushion next to me and wink.
 
John

Smiling at Rose nervously, I take the hint and move towards her to take a seat. Sitting onto the leather seat, I left a certain amount of space between us. Didn't want to seem to forword by sitting much to close to her so soon.

Much to my surprise, Rose moved close to make up for the small space between her and myself. Feeling her body against mine, I adjust myself slightly when I suddenly feel her put her hand on my thigh. Rose runs her hand along my leg slowly as she looks into my eyes with a smile on her face.

Begining to feel slightly uneasy, I ask her "Don't you think that, maybe, we're moving things to fast right now? We did just meet an hour ago." The look in her eyes gave me the answer to my question before she could answer. This chick was definatly something else.
 
Rose

Rose smiled softly, unable to help herself. Most men would have simply started to neck.

"You're sweet..." she murmurs leaning forward and licking his lips.
 
John

Letting out a small gasp as I feel her tongue press lightly against my lips, I try to move away but find it was pointless. Rose's tongue darts into my mouth and quickly licks around the inside. Meeting her tongue with my own, I begin to taste her as we both begin to fall more into the moment. Our lips press against each others while our tongue pressed against each other between our mouths.

Getting more lost in the moment, my arms wrap around her as they move into her top. Rose's skin felt nice and smooth against my touch as I rub her bare back under the shirt.

Suddenly, I pull away from the beautiful young woman in surprise at what I was just doing. Feeling slightly ashamed, I begin to apologise "I'm... I'm very sorry about doing that. I don't know what just came over me at that moment."

Then, I look into her dark lust filled eyes and realise she wasn't interested in talking. Licking her lips seductively, she stands up from the couch and slowly makes her way towards me. Something makes me back away from her advance. What was it about this woman that seemed to frighten me so much about getting near her? If it was any other woman, I would have been more open to this.

Continueing to back away, I stop when I feel my back press against the cold wall. Rose's smile widens across her lips at knowing that she now had me cornered. I swallow hard as her fingers press gently against my chest. Her hand begins rubbing along my chest in a sensual way as she presses her body against mine.
 
Rose

I smile slowly at him. My hands continue their play. With a gentle mental command chains snake out and pull his wrists taunt.

"Shhh...this will go much easier if you relax..." I murmur, nuzzling his throat. I reach for the hem of my tee and carefully peel it off. I watch his eyes widen as my black feathered wings stretch out. My pants and shoes go next, my black devil-tail twitches free and sigh.

"What?" I smirk at my prey. "Never seen a succubus?"

OOC: Sorry so short, about to got to go to class in a few...
 
John

OOC: Oh you're just full of excuses huh? ;)

IC: Looking back in shock at the form infront of me, I slowly shake my head in responce to her question. I had not known much about the Succubus other then what I saw in movies and tv shows. Now I was starting to wish that I would read more books other then comics and playboy. Rose presses her body against mine and begins to reach down to feel over my lower body.

Suddenly worried for my safety, I ask her in a low voice "You're... you're not going to kill me... are you?" I see a look of thought in her eyes at that question she was being asked.

Just then, I jerk in my binds at the sudden feeling of something rubbing against my crotch. Looking down, my eyes widen in surprise at seeing her black tail groping my groin area. Letting out a light sigh, I feel my erection begin to press against my pants against my will.
 
Rose

I grin at his reaction, letting my tail tease him.

"No..." I murmur, nipping his lips. I move lower and take one of his nipples between my teeth a moment.

"No...I won't kill you. You'll get laid, I'll get fed and you won't remember me in the morning..." I feel the bitterness seep into my voice. Was it so much to have one who truly...cared? Others had taken Vessels as life mates...She could do worse...

Mentally she shook herself. No one deserved her life, or to live it with her. She smiled back at John suddenly, kneeling to kiss his cock.
 
John

Knowing what she had planned for me, I try in vain to get free from the chains. Pulling, I'm unable to get my hands to break out from the binds. I can hear Rose giggle at my pathetic attempts to get loose as she moves her fingers around my pants. Her lips press against my dick head through my pants as I feel her tongue press against the fabric.

Suddenly feeling her fingers move at the zipper, I look down in disbelief as this beautiful woman begins to release my cock from my clothes. The cool air blows against the skin as Rose smiles widely at what she sees. She leans forword to take the head into her mouth slowly. Her lips roll along the skin, causing me to shiver in pleasure as I am sucked into her throat.
 
Rose

When I feel him began to thrust a bit, I pull back, grining. I slowly removed his shoes and socks, pulling his pants away completly. I grin at the aroused state of his manhood, as I slide upward to lick his lips.

"Don't go anywhere, Doll, be right back..." His eyes are wide when I return with a sharp, thin knife.

"Poor baby, don't you trust me?" I grin and slowly begin cutting off the rest of his clothes.
 
John

Cringing a little at the knife sliding along my skin, I try to stay still as the blade cuts through the fabric. Holding my breath, the knife slices through the shirt slowly. The shirt slides down my body once the arm and head pieces are taken care of. I look down to see all of my clothes laying on the floor at my feet. Grinning at the look on my face, Rose slides herself against my now nude body as her nails run over my chest.

"Is this going to hurt?" I ask in confussion over what a Succubus had to do with their mate. That part about her being 'feed' was what realy had me nervous about this whole thing.
 
Rose

I smile slowly.

"Maybe...But the pain will only heighten the pleasure..." I smirk, leaning forward to gently roll his nipple in mouth.

OOC: Damn...Sorry that was so short....
 
John

OOC: It's ok beautiful. *hugs*

IC: I let out a soft moan as Rose's lips press against my chest. She takes one of my nipples between her lips and begins to flick at it with her tongue. The moist prob presses roughly against the skin, rubbing the hardening object with each lick.

Letting myself go slightly, I stop trying to break free and decide to enjoy what I could. It was obvious she would take me nomatter what. Just then, one of her hands presses against the side of my chest. She grabs hold of my other nipple as she begins to pinch and pull it inbetween her fingers.
 
Rose

I pull away again, my eyes looking him over. The chains snap away suddenly.

"That way..." I motion toward my room.

"I'm faster then you...So don't try anything..."
 
John

Despite her warning, once the chains are gone I try to make a break for it. I'm not able to get far though, as Rose sticks out her foot and causes me to trip onto the floor. Hitting the floor with a thud, I look up to see a slightly upset Succubus looking down at me. Her arms folded across her chest, she has the chains grab me by the legs and pull me across the floor.

Try as I might, I was not going to get away from this whole mess. She was going to have me one way or another. I hold my side in slight pain from the fall I had just taken as she closes the door to her room behind us.
 
Rose

The chains release his feet and I sigh, he's on his back for the moment in the middle of my big silk bed.

"Hold still..." Drawing on a bit of my energy I pass my hand over his rapidly bruising side. A gentle heat sweeps through it and I let the wound heal.

"I warned you..." I murmured. I pulled my knees to my chest, just watching him. My wings close around me and I feel, for the first time in a bit, the crushing loniliness.

"Such warnings will not come lightly again..." I say softly as the chains wrap around his ankels and wrists to hold him down.

"You'll enjoy this..." I murmur with a smile, letting one of my wings brush his cock.

[Edited by RoseThorn on 01-07-2001 at 07:04 AM]
 
John

Jerking slightly at the sudden feel of her wing against my cock, I look at my capture in disbelief. She just took me down like nothing and heald my wound. This was just to crazy for me. The chains that bind me rattle from my movements as her wing continues to caress itself along my cock.

Turning my gaze back to Rose, I see her wink back at me as she moves over to kiss me hard on the lips. Her tongue probes into my mouth as she holds my head in place with her hands. I can feel her tail wrap around my erect cock, slowly moving itself along like a hand jerking me off. Moaning into her mouth, I begin to feel myself getting even more into this despite myself.
 
Rose

Rose's tale continued it's steady movements, stopping only when she sensed John was ready come.

"You don't really deserve to come you know..." she murmured misheviously, her head proped up on his chest. She leaned forward to gently lick his chest, tracing muscles with her tongue, again, stopping just as he began to enjoy it.

"I enjoy this part best you know...The anticipation." Her tail slowly stroked his cock again.

"Do you find me attractive?" Her sudden topic switch was startling.
 
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