sub's desires...

[petes478]

Her Master had been licking her as she lay restrained on the large bed.

He spread his sub's legs wider apart and continued licking and sucking her clit, while she writhed in ecstasy on his bed. She felt her legs beginning to shake and her bely quivered and her muscles started to contract as he continued to lap her like a dog with no let up.

He would do this from time to time, just devour her with passion, and when she would move or react, he would continue licking her between her legs until she erupted uncontrollably hips bucking, tits shaking, drenching her master's face in her juices. Making a little puddle in his bed.

Then he would rub her ass with oil and place her on all fours, face down, ass up.

She would require/need/crave him to ram her freshly cummed pussy with his large 10 inch cock and he would do so for hours.

This was discipline.

he would make her watch as his cock was serviced by the woman in the french maid uniform.

She was expert at fellatio, and she always made him cum in her hair and on her tits.

 

[catalina_francisco]

OK, have I missed something? Is there a question/discussion here or is it a sample of writing someone wants a critique on?

Catalina

 

[liberatedslave]

You've successfully reached the BDSM corner of Lit but this is more of a discussion forum. A post like yours would be better placed in the story idea forum but even there they'll want to know what kind of response you're after from other posters. (I'm sure that's what cat meant to say, being a moderator and all )

 

[Etoile]

Her Master had been licking her as she lay restrained on the large bed.

He spread his sub's legs wider apart and continued licking and sucking her clit, while she writhed in ecstasy on his bed. She felt her legs beginning to shake and her bely quivered and her muscles started to contract as he continued to lap her like a dog with no let up.

He would do this from time to time, just devour her with passion, and when she would move or react, he would continue licking her between her legs until she erupted uncontrollably hips bucking, tits shaking, drenching her master's face in her juices. Making a little puddle in his bed.

Then he would rub her ass with oil and place her on all fours, face down, ass up.

She would require/need/crave him to ram her freshly cummed pussy with his large 10 inch cock and he would do so for hours.

This was discipline.

he would make her watch as his cock was serviced by the woman in the french maid uniform.

She was expert at fellatio, and she always made him cum in her hair and on her tits.

So, decided to share your little wank fantasy with us? C'mon, make it hot, make it cohesive, give it a narrative, give it a point! Oh wait, you weren't interested in us, were you? You were only interested in getting your rocks off while you posted that?

Well, I hope either you or the keyboard was wearing a condom.

 

[lil_slave_rose]

she is submissive, but she always "made him" cum in her hair or on her tits? interesting......*shrugs*

 

[babiesmiles]

Semantics and personal use of syntax never lie !

Food for thoughts !

 

[wynnie]

she is submissive, but she always "made him" cum in her hair or on her tits? interesting......*shrugs*

laughing softly...awww rose dont be too hard on him... but it did work for laughing material...giggles.