Submission of Story and New Threads

[darthjser]

Hi everyone,

I posted two new threads and have yet gotten approved. I have also written a story.
I would like to know what is the time frame in which a thread and story is approved.

In addition, I notice that while writing the story, it gives me a question to put down. How can I make 4 options for that question? (Is it in the notes section?)

Thanks!



Regards,

Jeffrey

 

[jakelyon]

Hi everyone,

I posted two new threads and have yet gotten approved. I have also written a story.
I would like to know what is the time frame in which a thread and story is approved.

In addition, I notice that while writing the story, it gives me a question to put down. How can I make 4 options for that question? (Is it in the notes section?)

Thanks!



Regards,

Jeffrey

I read the story and I think it is pretty good overall. Well written and a nice subtle idea and approach; my only concern is that you may have used a few too many paragraphs. You might review it and see if you can tighten it up some. I approve of a lot of paragraphs in general, but it kind of breaks the story up a little.

You have the story set to 4 threads so you can add four threads onto your intro even before it is approved. You don't have to do anything else.

Also you have the story set to prompt for name, but you did not use that function in the intro. Also it is written in 1st person and your story summary shows a 3rd person POV? I am wondering if you really want it to be a name enabled story and if you want it to be 1st person in the summary?

Let me know.

Thanks.

 

[darthjser]

Hi Jakelyon,

I had resubmitted the story. There would only be two main characters.
However, I do not know how to use the continuing question. I want to have a question and four options for the reader to choose from. Is that possible?

It looks from the web page that I can only submit one question.
I would like one question of which the reader can have four options to choose from.

Do let me know! Thanks.


Regards,

Jeffrey

 

[Torg]

Hi Jakelyon,

I had resubmitted the story. There would only be two main characters.
However, I do not know how to use the continuing question. I want to have a question and four options for the reader to choose from. Is that possible?

It looks from the web page that I can only submit one question.
I would like one question of which the reader can have four options to choose from.

Do let me know! Thanks.


Regards,

Jeffrey

So, when you submit the intro, you submit a question at the end. Then when the next four threads are added to that intro, you get the four options.

 

[daciasdesire]

I would like one question of which the reader can have four options to choose from.

Then you need to write four continuing threads after the first.

Dacia

 

[darthjser]

Hi,

I had written another 4 threads but do not see the four options that readers can see.
In addition, I would like readers to be able to put in their name and a lover’s name for the second character.

The story I wrote “To the beach” has 2 characters. One is Jeffrey and the other is Clarissa.
I would like readers to be able to change Jeffrey to a name they want and Clarissa to the name of their fantasy.

Please do inform me how this can be done. Thank you and best regards.


Truly,

Jeffrey

 

[Torg]

Hi,

I had written another 4 threads but do not see the four options that readers can see.
In addition, I would like readers to be able to put in their name and a lover’s name for the second character.

The story I wrote “To the beach” has 2 characters. One is Jeffrey and the other is Clarissa.
I would like readers to be able to change Jeffrey to a name they want and Clarissa to the name of their fantasy.

Please do inform me how this can be done. Thank you and best regards.


Truly,

Jeffrey

Use {FIRST_NAME} and {LAST_NAME} everywhere you want the chosen names to appear.

 

[darthjser]

Hi Torg,

Thank you!


Jeffrey