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Sub-Challenge V

Sub-Challenge V

  • Evil Alpaca

    Votes: 21 35.6%

  • Deliciously Evil

    Votes: 27 45.8%

  • Bad Science

    Votes: 11 18.6%
  • Total voters
    59
  • Poll closed .
Halo_n_horns

Halo_n_horns

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The challenge ingredient was "Evil," and it seemed to suddenly quiet a number of regulars. Interesting ...

*Deleted for the protection of others* :(

"Deliciously Evil"
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e105/halo_n_horns/delisiously-evil.jpg

Deliciously Evil
poem by wildsweetone

It won’t hurt, she promised.
But it did.
It wasn’t the way
the whip licked
his skin, nor was it how
the red stripes patterned
across his cheeks.
It was the way her tongue
curled around the handle
and her eyes touched
the rise and fall of his chest,
how they fingered the curly hair
there and pulled up until he begged
for mercy. More!
had no place
in the grey room, no place
in her mind and no place
being uttered
from his lips.

__________________________________


"Deliciously Evil"
by Salvor-Hardon

"Open"
His words were soft
Yet still a command
And she parted her lips
Tasting leather
Before he moved

"Hold"
And she held very still
As he adjusted her feet
Where he wanted her to be
Bend over and
Very vulnerable

"Now"
The swats rained down on
On trembling white flesh
Red lines raised on skin
As he unleashed
His inner darkness

"Cum"
He released her to climax
Her body shook and shivered
And with a deep ragged breath
The whip fell
To the floor


"Pick it up and we'll start again"


"Bad Science"
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e105/halo_n_horns/837de4ca.jpg

This next one is a sub-entry from one of the artists above. For fairness I'm not including it in the voting, but nonetheless I thinks its a very cool piece and it even came with one more poem from the locals ...

*Deleted for the protection of others* :(

This last one is something I've been fiddling with since I announced the ingredient for this challenge. It will also be excluded from the voting since I believe it to be in bad taste to enter one's own challenge. It is also very unfinished, but I think everyone will see where its going.

Inspired from very mythological evil, "Gorgon."
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e105/halo_n_horns/Grgn.jpg

More artwork down below...

:cool:
 
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Bad Science looks wonderful, but is too small.

Alpaca because nudity wins over lips everytime.
 
I first must appologise to Halo, I was given a poem to illustrate and just couldnt do it justice and wasnt able to get on to tell Halo not to wait for my entry.

To Champagne, Im sorry I couldnt offer you anything in return, we must try it again sometime when the subject is easier for me to put on paper!

Great jobs on the entries, will cast my vote soon.
Cealy
 
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IF no one else sends in apoem for "deliciously evil" let me know. I thinks its wonderfully inspiring!
 
Salvor-Hardon said:
IF no one else sends in apoem for "deliciously evil" let me know. I thinks its wonderfully inspiring!
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Feel free to submit whatever your inspired to do. The more the merrier.

SensualCealy said:
I first must appologise to Halo, I was given a poem to illustrate and just couldnt do it justice and wasnt able to get on to tell Halo not to wait for my entry.
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I knew that at least one would come in with this scenario. Its not easy matching up one's artwork to the writings of someone else. Thus the challenge was a bit greater this time.

You should show us what you came up with anyway. :rose:


I started a bunch of threads last night to promote this thread. There were twelve, I believe. I'll post them all this evening, but in the meantime, feel free to hunt them down and bump them a bit. :D

:cool:
 
MechaBlade said:
Bad Science looks wonderful, but is too small.
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You're right about that, and I don't know why it posted that way. I didn't change the size at all and its several times larger than that when I look at on my computer.

If the artist knows how to remedy this please feel free to e-mail, PM or smoke signal me the instructions or a larger version of the entry.

:cool:
 
I found number three to have an intriguing tale in the art <grin

a fairy fair
bound to science
tied in the lab
experiments cruel
for the better of mankind
or rather the sadistic play
of one mad scientist.
 
Halo_n_horns said:
I knew that at least one would come in with this scenario. Its not easy matching up one's artwork to the writings of someone else. Thus the challenge was a bit greater this time.

You should show us what you came up with anyway. :rose:
:cool:
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Okay, so Champagne sent me a great poem, here it is:

There in the alley, menace moves beneath
a shadow, dressed for no good,
Purpose vague and undefined,

darkness oozes into corners too deep
to be soothed by the feeble wash
of watery light from the porch.

Every shrub shivers with this shade.
Fear drips off each twig. Tonight
he comes to murder smiles
with the bullet of unkindness.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Champagne

My intent was to use this picture I sketched as inside a window looking in from the porch. A man standing out of view with a gun looking in ready to take aim.

I got this far and could not get the dementions right for it to look half as good as the poem was wrote!

My appologies to Champagne~ Until next time :kiss:
C
 
SensualCealy said:
My intent was to use this picture I sketched as inside a window looking in from the porch. A man standing out of view with a gun looking in ready to take aim.

I got this far and could not get the dementions right for it to look half as good as the poem was wrote!

My appologies to Champagne~ Until next time :kiss:
C
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The poem is great and it looks like you found the right frame of mind for the artwork, and that was coming along pretty good as well.

Now get rid of that "loser" comment. :rose:

:cool:
 
SensualCealy said:
...
I got this far and could not get the dementions right for it to look half as good as the poem was wrote!

...
C
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If there is one thing I've learnt from sharing my writing/art with another poet/illustrator, it is that I am always in awe of the talent and skill of the other person. It can be a very humbling experience for both people, and it can be very rewarding.

If I worried constantly that my work would never be able to meet up with the standards that I believe are far beyond my reach, I would never write.

The key I think is to try to relax, to enjoy the process of working as a partnership. To just allow yourself to draw or write whatever the work of the other person conjures in your mind. It can be very freeing and very very surprising.

So, don't be afraid. Just chill out and enjoy it. :) Find which way around you prefer and feel most comfortable working and then find the partner that can work with you. :)

:rose:
 
 
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Hey Halo, I see three threads relating to this challenge in the Poetry Forum.

The one that I noticed that did get deleted was put in the Poetry Feedback Forum which is kept strictly for Poetry Feedback only. No other discussions are meant to be inside that forum - we all needed somewhere we could keep the writing the main focus.

:rose:
 
Halo_n_horns said:
The poem is great and it looks like you found the right frame of mind for the artwork, and that was coming along pretty good as well.

Now get rid of that "loser" comment. :rose:

:cool:
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Nope Im keeping it until I win one of these damn contests! lol
Thanks for the kudos though, I know where to look if I need a boost!
:kiss: C
 
wildsweetone said:
If there is one thing I've learnt from sharing my writing/art with another poet/illustrator, it is that I am always in awe of the talent and skill of the other person. It can be a very humbling experience for both people, and it can be very rewarding.

If I worried constantly that my work would never be able to meet up with the standards that I believe are far beyond my reach, I would never write.

The key I think is to try to relax, to enjoy the process of working as a partnership. To just allow yourself to draw or write whatever the work of the other person conjures in your mind. It can be very freeing and very very surprising.

So, don't be afraid. Just chill out and enjoy it. :) Find which way around you prefer and feel most comfortable working and then find the partner that can work with you. :)

:rose:
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I agree, and I guess I just didnt want to disappoint her. Bad habit I guess.
Time plays a big factor too, if I take too long on something it just doesnt get to where I want it. The quicker its done the happier I am usually.
C
 
wildsweetone said:
Hey Halo, I see three threads relating to this challenge in the Poetry Forum.

The one that I noticed that did get deleted was put in the Poetry Feedback Forum which is kept strictly for Poetry Feedback only. No other discussions are meant to be inside that forum - we all needed somewhere we could keep the writing the main focus.

:rose:
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Whatchu talkin' 'bout, Willis?! There was poetry in this contest to give feedback on. So there. ;)

:cool:
 
Halo_n_horns said:
Whatchu talkin' 'bout, Willis?! There was poetry in this contest to give feedback on. So there. ;)

:cool:
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*rolling eyes* lol

I just knew you were gonna be trouble. lol

:D
 
Lovely work on all ends. Vivid, imagination-provoking work. Thanks for linking to it over on the BDSM side.
 
wildsweetone said:
*rolling eyes* lol

I just knew you were gonna be trouble. lol

:D
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Yeah, well y'know. Trouble is so much more fun than ... well ... a stick in the eye. :D

:cool:
 
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