Stunned

[RenzaJones]

I am stunned. All the feedback on my stories except one basically said we like your story but it's not about the sex. Yay I guess all those creative writting classes paid off. (and to think I was just trying to get out of taking "real" classes)

 

[Colleen Thomas]

I am stunned. All the feedback on my stories except one basically said we like your story but it's not about the sex. Yay I guess all those creative writting classes paid off. (and to think I was just trying to get out of taking "real" classes)

Thats because you wrote a great story where the sex just adds to the effect rather than overshadowing the story

-Colly

 

[Jenny _S]

Uh Oh. Sounds like you got a very low Jack Off rating though

But congrads on the story. I read it and it was awsome

 

[Wills]

Dear Renzza,

Great pair of stories, hope you keep up the story line, lots of potential.

I'm with Colly, the story's strong, the sex is extra.

Will's

 

[pop_54]

Ha

Uh Oh. Sounds like you got a very low Jack Off rating though

But congrads on the story. I read it and it was awsome

hey Jenny, love the avatar, that certainly ranks 10 out of 10 on the Jack off scale

Hey Renza, nice one, sex in a story isn't compulsory if the tale's well written like yours it just adds to the air of erotica to have a little sex action. But too much humping and bumping can ruin a good story, you have the balance right.