Stuck in the Shower

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another Title Idea....

this one jumped intop my brain as I was lethargic in the shower this morning. No idea if its like a tv episode ( every sit com had one I think) where someone physically gets stuck ( that's usually a toe in the faucet of the tub, ain't it?), or something metaphorical.

ideas?

anyone?

free to a good home....

 

[Fantasies-only]

That sounds like every horrer and slasher movie cliche I can think of, but I think it started with Edger Alan Poe.

You could make a series of short stories from it, and call it "Trapped In The Shower", a take off on the rap/soap opera "Trapped In The Closet".

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

May be an incest angle here, with the son having to help his mom, or dad help his daughter.

 

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May be an incest angle here, with the son having to help his mom, or dad help his daughter.

gee.. I never thought of that!

 

[BedtimeStories77]

May be an incest angle here, with the son having to help his mom, or dad help his daughter.

gee.. I never thought of that!

Daddy never thought about an incest tale???

 

[Texguy84]

Tell me I'm not the first one to think of the possibility of a well-endowed fellow getting physically stuck while having some shower sex with his girl? Maybe she was practicing her kegels while he was overseas with the Army, and just did too good a job? The story from there is the guy playign with the girl's tits and clit, talking dirty to her, etc., trying to get the girl wet enough for him to be able to pull out or get fucking

 

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Daddy never thought about an incest tale???

too busy getting the lube to remove your toe, daughter.....

 

[Selena_Kitt]

Imagining a pair of handcuffs and the faucet....

 

[HarryHot]

I'm a fan of the Loving wife categories.

You could have it so the wife has her toe stuck in tap, and she needs help. Not too keen on the whole Mother-Son thing but the person would need to be related otherwise why would they be at her house when her husband is not there? Poss a nephew or younger brother-inlaw.

Could even bring the husband into it the couple would set this up to entice the young nephew into sex with the husband hiding and watching from towel cupboard.

Couldn't thing of a sexier site for a 19 yr old than to walk into see his big busted aunty in the bath the bubbles slowly dissolving around the sides of her breasts. As one big toe is stuck in a tap and the other foot is slowly sliding forwards and backword along the rim of the bath.

If you didn't to want go down the family route. you could have builders who hear the cry for help.

Anyway you can see where my kink lies!

HarryHot

 

[Fantasies-only]

I'm a fan of the Loving wife categories.

You could have it so the wife has her toe stuck in tap, and she needs help. Not too keen on the whole Mother-Son thing but the person would need to be related otherwise why would they be at her house when her husband is not there? Poss a nephew or younger brother-inlaw.

Could even bring the husband into it the couple would set this up to entice the young nephew into sex with the husband hiding and watching from towel cupboard.

Couldn't thing of a sexier site for a 19 yr old than to walk into see his big busted aunty in the bath the bubbles slowly dissolving around the sides of her breasts. As one big toe is stuck in a tap and the other foot is slowly sliding forwards and backword along the rim of the bath.

If you didn't to want go down the family route. you could have builders who hear the cry for help.

Anyway you can see where my kink lies!

HarryHot

The toe in the faucet cliche is more comedy fluff than erotica.
I think it should be neighbor and wife in the shower with son watching and recording this, for both entertainment and blackmail.

Father comes home early and has sex with daughter, calling neighbor's sister to make a threesome.
The wife and neighbor are really stuck in the shower now, even if they could get out!

 

[MzDeviancy]

Tell me I'm not the first one to think of the possibility of a well-endowed fellow getting physically stuck while having some shower sex with his girl? Maybe she was practicing her kegels while he was overseas with the Army, and just did too good a job? The story from there is the guy playign with the girl's tits and clit, talking dirty to her, etc., trying to get the girl wet enough for him to be able to pull out or get fucking

You know honey, I can appreciate the whole patriotic, 'I support our troops!' thing, but it's a little out of place in erotica. Obviously you can write whatever stories you want, but I'd just like to point out that people are thinking about war and death enough without finding it in their escapist literature. I've seen a couple of stories on here that brought up the Middle East, and all it did was start fights. Erotica is not supposed to be about propagating one's political beliefs.

Sorry patriots, Canadian and American alike, but my advice is to just leave unwritten story ideas about soldiers who fought in either Afghanistan or Iraq.

 

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The toe in the faucet cliche is more comedy fluff than erotica.
I think it should be neighbor and wife in the shower with son watching and recording this, for both entertainment and blackmail.

Father comes home early and has sex with daughter, calling neighbor's sister to make a threesome.
The wife and neighbor are really stuck in the shower now, even if they could get out!

I love it!

 

[BedtimeStories77]

too busy getting the lube to remove your toe, daughter.....

Man, I hate it when I get myself stuck.

Imagining a pair of handcuffs and the faucet....

Ooooo... I likie!! Nice mental image there!

 

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Man, I hate it when I get myself stuck.






Ooooo... I likie!! Nice mental image there!

at our mercy

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Sounds great.....

 

[Fantasies-only]

I love it!

I thought you might.
It kinda has more plot developement going full circle, but then the father is doing the daughter too, so a twist could be there as well.

 

[TJChurch]

No idea if its like a tv episode ( every sit com had one I think) where someone physically gets stuck ( that's usually a toe in the faucet of the tub, ain't it?)

I know this happened on "Dick Van Dyke". (Gee, "Dick" & "Dyke" in Literotica? Who'd have thunk?) but I also seem to recall ex-Pres. Taft being stuck in the White House tub once or twice. (I wasn't there, of course; Think I read about it in school.)

 

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I know this happened on "Dick Van Dyke". (Gee, "Dick" & "Dyke" in Literotica? Who'd have thunk?) but I also seem to recall ex-Pres. Taft being stuck in the White House tub once or twice. (I wasn't there, of course; Think I read about it in school.)

the young Mary Tyler Moore was so delectable....

 

[Texguy84]

You know honey, I can appreciate the whole patriotic, 'I support our troops!' thing, but it's a little out of place in erotica. Obviously you can write whatever stories you want, but I'd just like to point out that people are thinking about war and death enough without finding it in their escapist literature. I've seen a couple of stories on here that brought up the Middle East, and all it did was start fights. Erotica is not supposed to be about propagating one's political beliefs.

Sorry patriots, Canadian and American alike, but my advice is to just leave unwritten story ideas about soldiers who fought in either Afghanistan or Iraq.

Eh, I picked a "Away from home for extended period of time" at random, and "in the Army" seemed like a good excuse for the guy to be absent for several months while the missus worked out. If you prefer, he could be returning from, oh, I don't know, a intercontinental foot race or kayaking to Australia and back on a bet, something time-consuming like that. Didn't really express my beliefs on the military, foreign (or domestic) politics, or anything else in that post, so I'd appreciate it if you stop stuffing opinions that you don't agree with in my mouth.

 

[MzDeviancy]

Eh, I picked a "Away from home for extended period of time" at random, and "in the Army" seemed like a good excuse for the guy to be absent for several months while the missus worked out. If you prefer, he could be returning from, oh, I don't know, a intercontinental foot race or kayaking to Australia and back on a bet, something time-consuming like that. Didn't really express my beliefs on the military, foreign (or domestic) politics, or anything else in that post, so I'd appreciate it if you stop stuffing opinions that you don't agree with in my mouth.

First of all, if you seriously can't think of another reason that he'd be away from home for an extended period of time, that doesn't really speak well of the strength of your creative muscles.

Second of all, unless of course you were going to suggest he was stationed somewhere like Sweden - which I doubt, because almost any Yank who writes a story with a soldier in it these days has him coming home from Iraq/Afghanistan and a tour in a place where no one gets killed isn't nearly as sexy - then you were proposing a story about a soldier who's just fought in a war that's viewed as both illegal and immoral by many people. Just seeing the title 'Soldier Comes Home...' can put many people in a bad mood because they can't even escape the war on a porn site. And you know what? This isn't the place for that.

 

[Fantasies-only]

Jack Tripper hides from Chrisies' jealous boyfriend after they get handcuffed together by accident (thought to be Larry's trick handcuffs).
Chrisie gets caught in the shower with bare shoulders peeking from behind the curtain.
Jack's date and Janet come by and hear the shower.
Jack is soon discovered.
Mr. Ferler assures nothing could go on between them (another gay joke).

 

[AsylumSeeker]

"Dad, promise you won't look!"

Her left toe was caught in the faucet and her right leg was splayed precariosly on the floor, leaving her totsllhy exposed! She reahes for a towel, then tosses it out of her reach.

Daddy, please help/

 

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"Dad, promise you won't look!"

Her left toe was caught in the faucet and her right leg was splayed precariosly on the floor, leaving her totsllhy exposed! She reahes for a towel, then tosses it out of her reach.

Daddy, please help/

I think you should write this and submit to the Story side.

 

[Texguy84]

First of all, if you seriously can't think of another reason that he'd be away from home for an extended period of time, that doesn't really speak well of the strength of your creative muscles.

Second of all, unless of course you were going to suggest he was stationed somewhere like Sweden - which I doubt, because almost any Yank who writes a story with a soldier in it these days has him coming home from Iraq/Afghanistan and a tour in a place where no one gets killed isn't nearly as sexy - then you were proposing a story about a soldier who's just fought in a war that's viewed as both illegal and immoral by many people. Just seeing the title 'Soldier Comes Home...' can put many people in a bad mood because they can't even escape the war on a porn site. And you know what? This isn't the place for that.

Eh, I grew up on Air Force bases, so I tend to think of military related stuff first, if I don't think of something related to Star Trek, Star Wars, photography, or some other particular area of geekdom for me. I'm thinking from probably a different perspective than you are, so we'll think of different things, which is of course the whole POINT of this discussion board.

Secondly, he actually could be stationed in Sweden, if he was a US Marine stationed at the US embassy there, since the US Marines act as embassy guards. Random interesting note though, there ARE currently members of the Swedish navy (the crew of a diesel submarine) currently stationed in the US right now, helping train the US Navy to fight navies with diesel subs (which are quieter than the nuclear subs that Russia has).

He could also be stationed in Denmark, where the US has a largish military presence, or he could be stationed in Korea, like a friend of mine was for a while, or Japan, or England, or Germany, or Bosnia. Any number of reasons the guy might get stationed overseas but the girl would find it highly impractical to move too (school, a job, whatever). The guy could even get sent to another base in the US for some specific kind of training for a few months without ever leaving the country.

That said, now that I've thought about it, I suppose the guy could be away working on an internship in another state, or he could have joined the Peace Corps in Africa if you prefer. Hell, I suppose he could have gotten a job working at a summer camp. For the purposes of this discussion, any of those would work just as well as my original idea.

As for not being able to escape discussion of an ongoing war even on a porn site, you're the only one I see who keeps bringing it up in this conversation.

 

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wow...settle down guys!