Stripper Characters

[PanicByNumbers]

Going back and forth on an idea I'm considering writing. The basic premise of the story is...you know what? I'm just going to copy it here.....

Just an idea(fantasy) I have about a guy saving a billionaire's life and accidentally helping him make several extra billion. The billionaire's really grateful to the guy and invites the guy for a shared vacation. Thing is, the billionaire wants to take along some girls too to entertain his new friend/savior. The guy owns several strip clubs and night clubs and in order to get to know the friend better and help plan for the vacation he takes him to some of his strip clubs so his savior can enjoy himself and pick some girls for when they go on holiday. When they get to the strip clubs the girls have already been told to give his friend the full VIP treatment which essentially means the girls all act like eager cum dumpsters. Chicks in micro bikinis and the skimpiest outfits are flirting ceaselessly and draping themselves over them, inviting them to play as much as they want. The billionaire tells his friend to just have fun with the girls. The friend's a bit uncertain. The billionaire tells him to point out which girls he thinks are the hottest. He chooses a few and he's immediately got a girl cuddling up to him under each arm, one in his lap and a couple more trying to touch him anyway they can. Billionaire knows his friend is still a bit shy so he gets his buddy's attention and very casually slips his hands down two separate girls tops, clearly fondling their tits. The girls just smile. The friend asks the girls he's got on his arms if he can do that too. The girls grin and give encouraging yes'. While they're each groping their respective girls, the billionaire gets one girl's attention and points to his lap, girl smiles and slips to her knees under the table. Friend does the same with a different girl and now both are playing with two pairs of tits while each has a hottie very publicly and enthusiastically bobbing their head in their laps.



I honestly don't want to imagine half a dozen or so strippers/sluts when I think you guys can give me several superior ideas for strippers. I've already got an idea of the billionaire and protagonist in my head, but I was hoping you guys could provide some slut concepts. I won't guarantee I'll use your character, but if you give a description (name, body/appearance and personality) of the girl, please include some act you'd like her to perform in the story and if I do use her, I'll have her do it. I'd like to reiterate I'm going to turn her into a totally eager, willing, and submissive cum dumpster and I think my characters are going to be a bit...degrading to the girls. Thank you for your help and consideration.

 

[Fantasies_only]

Maybe it's not exactly the same, but it's too close to an actual Richard Prior movie.
I think it's called "None Of The Above", referring to some scenes in the movie as an independent candidate that nobody would vote for.

It's about a man who died, and to get his inheritance Prior had to spend a million dollars in 7 days, but he couldn't tell anyone why he was doing this, purposelessly lose gambling, or give it all to charity.
He also had to spend every dime of extra money that came from the original money.

Some scenes in the movie are described in your story.

 

[PanicByNumbers]

Movie was called "Brewster's Millions", I own it and how is this similar?

 

[sr71plt]

That looks OK for a story premise (and it doesn't matter if it's basically been done before. Almost everything has been done before). But where's the story? All it is is a story setup ending in what is probably a series of sex scenes. Where's a story arc? What's the dilemma? What's the resolution? What's the point?

 

[Fantasies_only]

Movie was called "Brewster's Millions", I own it and how is this similar?

"Brewster's Millions" was about an any man on the street (Richard Prior) plot device, pretending to be a stuck up Yuppy (Rob Lowe).
"Trading Places" was about a poor bum (Eddie Murphy) trading places with a rich S.O.B. (Dan Aykroyd).

The point is, whatever the movie is, it has some similar scenes, which I guess is ok since all of it is not the same.

 

[J.Q. Hack]

Have you ever been to a strip club before? I'd suggest thinking of some of the girls you saw there. Some can be incredibly hot in a very trashy way, while others are merely cute and some are just plain gorgeous. These different types of dancers can fill in nicely for the different strippers.

If you want to make the characters realistic then try to remember some of the lines the strippers used on you and your friends to get you to part with your money or things you overheard them saying. Chances are they'd use the same things on your protagonist.

You don't need to come up with names and exact physical attributes for every stripper they run across that night. You would only need that much for one or maybe two of the girls. They would be additional main characters -- perhaps adding the conflict to the story that it seems it needs.

J.Q.