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[Bachlum Chaam]

Sorry if this is the wrong place to ask but...family etc.What is best way to get someone to give me their thoughts on a story I have written,any advice would be much appreciated
greetz Bachlum Chaam

 

[English Lady]

try posting a thread on the story feedback forum, people are really good over there and i am sure someone will give you the feedback and help you need there