angelicminx
Loving the monkey!
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I've written a love story with a different twist and would love some feedback on it. Please? Now and Forever Ch. 01
Story with a twist... feedback?
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slyc_willie
Captain Crash
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Absolutely loved it
While reading the story, I kept getting the imression that Brogan's wife was not what she seemed. The depictions of sex and the mention of Kit's 'Husky' voice made me suspect the truth, but I was still surprised -- and pleasantly so -- at the ending.
One of the best I've ever read, Minx. A very well-deserved 5.
Slyc.
While reading the story, I kept getting the imression that Brogan's wife was not what she seemed. The depictions of sex and the mention of Kit's 'Husky' voice made me suspect the truth, but I was still surprised -- and pleasantly so -- at the ending.
One of the best I've ever read, Minx. A very well-deserved 5.
Slyc.
