Story with a good BJ description?

[fcknfresh]

Hello you lovely people...

I'm looking for a story that has an amazing, awe inspiring description of a male character receiving oral sex. Since I'm female, I'm not sure of the actual emotions and feelings of receiving a BJ. And outside of my husband's piss poor description, I really have no inspiration for writing my own scene.

Does anyone know of any stories that have such a description?

Or does anyone want to throw their own personal description my way?

TIA

 

[PennLady]

There can't be any shortage of those especially in the gay male section. I was going to give you a link to one of my stories, but I just looked it over and the BJ description is not what you're looking for. I can say I just read a free Kindle book called 'Rule of Three' that might help you; here's the link: http://www.amazon.com/Rule-of-Three-ebook/dp/B007706GTK

It's about a relationship between a man and a woman that grows to include another man. There is M/M sex in there as well as M/F sex and BJs done by both the men and the woman. I thought all the sex in that story was pretty hot and well done.

So I can't suggest a specific story but I really don't that you'll have to look that hard.

 

[Euphony]

Hello you lovely people...
Since I'm female, I'm not sure of the actual emotions and feelings of receiving a BJ.

I will say that many mens emotions re: BJ are "OMG, Im getting a bj!" and similar simple thoughts.

There were many years and many partners who's "functional" bjs were, to me, the experience one could reasonably expect. Until someone went nuts on me one time, I was clueless to there being a whole range of possbilities, emotions, sensations,etc.

Bad BJs are IMO often still functional BJs (in that the man gets off) When youre conditioned that that is the goal and the party is over for you, you accept it as reality and how things are.

And outside of my husband's piss poor description, I really have no inspiration for writing my own scene.

Again, his description may be 100% valid and what he thinks. Plenty of men drop into a "Im being fondled" mental state and thats about where the depth ends. Just as a kiss can feel obligatory or mechanical by the receiver, so can a blowjob. And that extends even over "good" blowjobs. (I have two friends who no matter how all out their girlfriends go just dont get deeply into it. Different strokes, different folks.)

Does anyone know of any stories that have such a description?

Stories abound in gay male and there's even a few things in the "how to" section that might help.

I will say though, it is NOT a universal experience. I probably skew to the far end of the sensory perception scale. Theres no usual or normal.

And don't forget, you can write it as greater than most guys are used to, a "pinnacle" if you will. Thats an exciting read so long as you stay within reasonable physical possibilities (he came 7 times without deflating a bit would not fly )

Or does anyone want to throw their own personal description my way?

PM'd

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

In 64 years I've had a handful of incredible blow jobs by one woman, I met her in Spain. She ruined me for any other. Based on my fund of experiences most women have no idea how to suck a cock. But that's okay, its the thought that counts.

Ana loved to suck dicks, she said so with a smile. What a girl.

 

[slyc_willie]

Feel free to check a few of my stories -- The Babysitter's Prize, One Blissful Night, Door to Door, and the By the Numbers series -- for some descriptive hetero blowjob scenes. Just check the link in my sig.

 

[lovecraft68]

Just curious why everyone is mentioning GM? The OP is female and doesn't seem to be looking for Bi or GM, just how a guy describes a blow job.

I agree with a lot of what Euphony says, most guys will have a very simple description. They are getting their cock sucked, it feels really good, case closed.

For me, I tend to think beyond the simple sensation. The visual of receiving a BJ is as stimulating as the feeling.

I look at her eyes (eye contact is big with guys during this) I think of good her long hair looks and feels on my thighs, when she is kneeling and I am sitting I take in the sensation of her breasts pressing against my thighs.

How good her long nails look around me as she stroked, the smears of lipstick on my cock, the way she caresses my balls during it.

I focus on the soft moans and sounds she makes as she sucks, the look of pleasure in her eyes as she pleases me. If she is laying between my legs, I let my eyes roam down her body, take in her ass, her legs, I like when she bends her legs and playfully kicks her feet back and forth and I watch her hips grind into the bed because she is turned on.

All this is what I take in and enjoy in the addition to the feeling of her warm wet mouth and soft tongue and lips.

 

[PennLady]

Just curious why everyone is mentioning GM? The OP is female and doesn't seem to be looking for Bi or GM, just how a guy describes a blow job.

Because, since both characters involved in the sex act are males, you would be guaranteed a male POV on what's going on and hence a male description of a blow job. It wouldn't be quite the same, obviously, as a woman giving a BJ to a guy, but it's a good start.

For me, I tend to think beyond the simple sensation. The visual of receiving a BJ is as stimulating as the feeling.

What if the guy is nearsighted? I'm kidding but serious there. I think you have good point about the visual aspects, and I've read a number of articles about keeping one's eyes open during sex, making eye contact with the partner, etc., but I'm nearsighted. Often I don't have my contacts in (and no glasses on either) so the visual thing gets lost on me. I can't see well. Blurry is not sexy.

 

[lovecraft68]

Because, since both characters involved in the sex act are males, you would be guaranteed a male POV on what's going on and hence a male description of a blow job. It wouldn't be quite the same, obviously, as a woman giving a BJ to a guy, but it's a good start.



What if the guy is nearsighted? I'm kidding but serious there. I think you have good point about the visual aspects, and I've read a number of articles about keeping one's eyes open during sex, making eye contact with the partner, etc., but I'm nearsighted. Often I don't have my contacts in (and no glasses on either) so the visual thing gets lost on me. I can't see well. Blurry is not sexy.

Hmm, well let me give you some advice. As someone who also wears contacts? I keep them in during sex to fully enjoy the experience. It only takes a second to take it out when I'm done, or sometimes I just fall asleep with them.

What always reminds me they are in is when I wake up during the night, look at the clock and realize I can see what time it is.

 

[soflabbwlvr]

I was going to suggest a particular story where the only sex act is a blow job, but upon closer examination it seems to be told more from her POV than his. An older story of mine with a pretty detailed description is found here. This story is first person, with a male POV. Hope it helps.

 

[Desiremakesmeweak]

This is a really good question.

I'm just going to say the following in order, I suppose, to shake a few things up a little. There are blowjobs and there are blowjobs.

Porn is riddled with it because most modern pop porn either emanates or is funded from the US and US society is infantile. Blowjobs are projected infantilism.

Most blowjobs you see in porn videos are banal and sexually illiterate and frankly, boring.

And so your question is: "what is the description of a REALLY GOOD blowjob undertaken by a mature and experienced and knowledgeable exponent?"

Well, I know that in spite of the noise from the sexually illiterate about how great a blowjob ALWAYS is, the feeling can be rather pathetic, with teeth annoyingly touching too sensitive areas in the totally wrong way, repetitious moves searching for an ejaculation that isn't going to arrive, and radically wrong assumptions about what all males 'necessarily' and unquestioningly desire.

Someone who thinks they simply 'must' give a blowjob because the other person 'must' love it no matter what - is wasting their time, their tongue, and their mouth muscles. And included in that is the person who assumes they are 'great' at giving one.

Sex is about everything, the whole body, the whole mind, every slight movement of every single muscle of the body and every nerve twitch. One type of sex act in isolation from the whole sex expression is often fairly meaningless.

 

[PennLady]

Hmm, well let me give you some advice. As someone who also wears contacts? I keep them in during sex to fully enjoy the experience. It only takes a second to take it out when I'm done, or sometimes I just fall asleep with them.

What always reminds me they are in is when I wake up during the night, look at the clock and realize I can see what time it is.

With my luck, I'd lose one during the act and then get a headache from the resulting vision issues. Hmmm... plot bunny?