Story will need criticism

[Nesa]

I am currently writing a short story.
I cannot take full credit for the story as it was me and my partner together with another couple that started it.

Each of us would say a few sentances and then leave it for the next person to finnish the story. It started off fairly inoccent but after a little alcohol it became fairly graphic...

We all enjoyed telling the story and I decieded (with the others permission) that i would write it dpwn and share it online. I have read many of the stories on this site foe many years but have never posted anything myself or even joined up...

It isn't finnished yet and i want the others to read through it first before i share it with you all, but i wanted to know if anyone was willing to read through it when its finnished and let me know what they think.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Is this a heads up or did you want us to critique the story? If the latter, um... where is it?

 

[mjl2010]

I'll do a pre-read on your story. Basically, I'll look for story continuity, general grammar and the sort of stuff that gets new writers beaten up for.

This won't be an edit by any means.

By the way, you have both Private messages and Email turned off. When did you think of having this ready? PM or Email me.

MJL

 

[Nesa]

This was a heads up, just testing the water really. Im just finnishing it and making sure myself and the others are happy with me showing it to others before i send it. I can either post it in the forums, PM/Email it, i dont mind.

 

[mjl2010]

This was a heads up, just testing the water really. Im just finnishing it and making sure myself and the others are happy with me showing it to others before i send it. I can either post it in the forums, PM/Email it, i dont mind.

copy and paste in an email is best.

 

[Dragonfly54]

I am currently writing a short story.
I cannot take full credit for the story as it was me and my partner together with another couple that started it.

Each of us would say a few sentances and then leave it for the next person to finnish the story. It started off fairly inoccent but after a little alcohol it became fairly graphic...

We all enjoyed telling the story and I decieded (with the others permission) that i would write it dpwn and share it online. I have read many of the stories on this site foe many years but have never posted anything myself or even joined up...

It isn't finnished yet and i want the others to read through it first before i share it with you all, but i wanted to know if anyone was willing to read through it when its finnished and let me know what they think.

I would be glad to read your work via email as well.