Story: Silvia’s Adventure

[Guest]

Here's a link to my first story:

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/2698

I would like to know what people think about it.

 

[gizmoo69]

I'm not really into sci-fi/fantasy erotica, but found this genuinely well written and sexy.

However, while the storyline is original, you have to be careful that your threads are not covering the same ground (every thread seems to end up with Silvia being a slave, for instance)

Good job though!