story roadblocks

[Reshbod]

Story roadblocks are little problems that get in the way of the story that prevent it from coming together.

I currently have a story I am working on that is mostly finished, but it just needs a good plot contivance. I do try to make my stories unique and different from most of the stuff out there, whether I succeed or not is a different question.

My current roadblock involves how to get a 30 year old pregnant woman (7-8 months) into a fraternity party and make it seem (somewhat) realistic. I have a few scenarios in draft form but nothing that, to me, seems to logically flow. I want to avoid the more usual cliches that one finds in these types of stories, but trying to find a different and believable angle is proving to be a challenge.

I'm sure others deal with this and am curious to see if anyone (responds?) has encountered this and how they dealt with it.

 

[Guest]

She's the big sister of one of the members? She arrives to see him, he isn't there, and then on with the scene?

It's all contrived, but maybe that isn't so much of a reach.

 

[DeeZire]

If they're neighbors, she could be going over there to borrow a cup of beer.

 

[Guest]

If they're neighbors, she could be going over there to borrow a cup of beer.

I like yours better.

Less contrived and all.

 

[emap]

Ooooo oooo, stopping there because cell phone died, doesn't have the little charging thingy and has to call for directions.

Don't look at me like that, that sort of thing happens often, though generally not stopping at a frat party to use the phone. Easy enough to explain, going to see younger brother, sister, or best friends younger who goes to the college.

 

[SavannahMann]

My pathetic offering

Has arrived to speak to the boy who's dating her little sister. Intends to let him know she's not going to tolerate any of that frat boy bullshit regarding her sister.

I'm guessing at this point she ends up with so many dicks going through her they end up double parked on her ass.

 

[Reshbod]

Yeah, most of those scenarios I have considered in one or another. So far nothing has grabbed me. I'll keep working and hopefully I can come up with an interesting setup.

 

[Stella_Omega]

She's horny as hell.

Seriously, by the time a woman reaches 7 months (and if she's feeling pretty good in every other respect), her genitals are permanently engorged with blood and her clit is thrumming non stop.

 

[jomar]

She's a professor, the faculty adviser for the frat. And has always been a bit taken with the lads.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

cop, bill collector, pizza delivery, butcher, baker, candle stick maker

 

[impressive]

Ooooo oooo, stopping there because cell phone died, doesn't have the little charging thingy and has to call for directions.

Don't look at me like that, that sort of thing happens often, though generally not stopping at a frat party to use the phone. Easy enough to explain, going to see younger brother, sister, or best friends younger who goes to the college.

That's the reason I always give when I crash a frat party.

 

[TE999]

Her husband was a frat-rat and she was a sorority sister at the university.

She stopped by to see what the houses looked like twelve years later.

And thanks to the bun in her oven she's horny as a jackrabbit...

 

[Guest]

Has arrived to speak to the boy who's dating her little sister. Intends to let him know she's not going to tolerate any of that frat boy bullshit regarding her sister.

I'm guessing at this point she ends up with so many dicks going through her they end up double parked on her ass.

Why do I all of a sudden hear "Bow - chicka - wow - wow" ?

 

[damppanties]

She's horny as hell.

Seriously, by the time a woman reaches 7 months (and if she's feeling pretty good in every other respect), her genitals are permanently engorged with blood and her clit is thrumming non stop.

Wow!

Seven months of what?