story request

[smut_glut]

i want a story about a 25 year old stud virgin flying half way across the world to fuck a hot milf. please involve something about sucking her pussy while she sleeps. also she can deep throat and tongue his balls at the same time. he's a bit clumsy because it's his first time, but she's a graceful teacher. she also lets him have a threesome where she tribs another woman and lets him put his dick in the middle of their scissoring pussies. she's jealous and makes sure that his dick doesn't go inside the other woman tho. also please say how nice her pussy smells. if possible please include some food related sex as well as animalistic sex.
thank you

 

[LindsayRae]

Wow. Just wow.

 

[BlackSnake]

lol....this just makes me think alot!

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

... she can deep throat and tongue his balls at the same time. ...

If she can do that he has a pretty small set of genitalia, otherwise there isn't room in her mouth for his cock and balls.

 

[smut_glut]

If she can do that he has a pretty small set of genitalia, otherwise there isn't room in her mouth for his cock and balls.

the tongue would extend outside of the mouth ( as is often the case when someone Tongues something) and tongue the parts of the scrotum that are reachable. his genitals are average sized.

 

[smut_glut]

i forgot to mention that they don't meet in the airport. he flies early to surprise her and sneaks into her house/room and creeps under her sheets where he sucks her sweet sleeping pussy.

 

[LindsayRae]

the tongue would extend outside of the mouth ( as is often the case when someone Tongues something) and tongue the parts of the scrotum that are reachable. his genitals are average sized.

Stick a cock in your mouth. Nothing else is "reachable" with your tongue. This was one of several things "wrong" (as in not plausible) with your idea. I should have just stuck with my "wow".

 

[smut_glut]

Stick a cock in your mouth. Nothing else is "reachable" with your tongue. This was one of several things "wrong" (as in not plausible) with your idea. I should have just stuck with my "wow".

Maybe you just aren't any good? Or haven't been watching the right porn?
What other things are wrong with my idea?
Why should you have stuck with "wow"?
Is this tiresome for you?

 

[smut_glut]

Stick a cock in your mouth. Nothing else is "reachable" with your tongue. This was one of several things "wrong" (as in not plausible) with your idea. I should have just stuck with my "wow".

http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=deep throat tongue massage

http://www.oystersandchocolate.com/Articles/911/DeepThroat101.aspx

http://www.rahoorkhuit.net/library/yoga/tantra/techniques/deep_throat_made_easy.html

yw

 

[LindsayRae]

Maybe you just aren't any good? Or haven't been watching the right porn?

lol

What other things are wrong with my idea?

1.) "Stud virgin"
2.) Why would he fly halfway across the world to fuck? Does he know this woman? Is he a long distance stalker and raper?
3.) Being clumsy... Get the whole virgin thing...but, again, that "clashes" with "stud".
4.) Strangers have a threesome that quickly?
5.) What does "trib" mean?
6.) How can his cock "fit between scissoring pussies"?
7.) Let's assume you meant "trick"... How stupid is this other woman to not see this naked virgin boy in the same room with her and her lesbian lover?
8.) Why would woman one be jealous when she doesn't know this boy that has flown halfway across the world to fuck her? And why should she care? They're not dating.
9.) How does a pussy, meaning a woman's cunt and not an animal, sleep?

Want more? lol


P.S.
Merry Christmas.

 

[smut_glut]

lol


1.) "Stud virgin"
2.) Why would he fly halfway across the world to fuck? Does he know this woman? Is he a long distance stalker and raper?
3.) Being clumsy... Get the whole virgin thing...but, again, that "clashes" with "stud".
4.) Strangers have a threesome that quickly?
5.) What does "trib" mean?
6.) How can his cock "fit between scissoring pussies"?
7.) Let's assume you meant "trick"... How stupid is this other woman to not see this naked virgin boy in the same room with her and her lesbian lover?
8.) Why would woman one be jealous when she doesn't know this boy that has flown halfway across the world to fuck her? And why should she care? They're not dating.
9.) How does a pussy, meaning a woman's cunt and not an animal, sleep?

Want more? lol


P.S.
Merry Christmas.

You have no imagination or poetic sensibility.
I thought this was a literary forum?
You seem to want me to write the story for you, and, quite frankly, I can see why.
And you don't even know what trib means...noob.

 

[LindsayRae]

You have no imagination or poetic sensibility.
I thought this was a literary forum?
You seem to want me to write the story for you, and, quite frankly, I can see why.

I am not the only person at Literotica that feels plausibility is necessary in a story. You could write about purple or sapphire aliens living in their home planet if you want, but what makes a writer a good one is the ability to make their world sound real.

I want you to write nothing for me. I never asked for such a thing. Thank you.

 

[KiaraNightshadow]

Trib: When a female grinds her vaginal region against her partner's vaginal region.

Okay, so people here are trying to tell you that your story idea is not realistic. And being a person who thinks there should be an actual story involved when someone is writing a story, I agree. Writing just about sexual acts with no overarching plot is just...boring.

I can understand that a young virgin can be considered a "stud" if he works well with the ladies, but is too insecure with himself to actually have sex with them. There are actually people like that out in the world--and most of those men are gay or thought to be gay.

So, alright, there's this guy who wants to get laid. Fine. Why can't he just go down the street and fuck someone there instead of flying halfway across the world, investing all that time and money, to see someone he doesn't know?

It's workable as an idea, but if you want it to be more than just a sex porn story, you have a lot of development to do.

Be flexible with your ideas.
-KN

 

[smut_glut]

Trib: When a female grinds her vaginal region against her partner's vaginal region.

Okay, so people here are trying to tell you that your story idea is not realistic. And being a person who thinks there should be an actual story involved when someone is writing a story, I agree. Writing just about sexual acts with no overarching plot is just...boring.

I can understand that a young virgin can be considered a "stud" if he works well with the ladies, but is too insecure with himself to actually have sex with them. There are actually people like that out in the world--and most of those men are gay or thought to be gay.

So, alright, there's this guy who wants to get laid. Fine. Why can't he just go down the street and fuck someone there instead of flying halfway across the world, investing all that time and money, to see someone he doesn't know?

It's workable as an idea, but if you want it to be more than just a sex porn story, you have a lot of development to do.

Be flexible with your ideas.
-KN

Ok. I guess if you're reading it to masturbate to, you care about realism because it's distracting to wonder what 'sapphire aliens' look like, etc.
I'm wanting this more for entertainment though, and I value creativity and thinking outside of the box.
Which might include a woman with the Superhuman power to tongue ballsack while she deep throats...unimaginable and impossible I know (although I've seen it done in porn more than once).
Why can't he go down the street? Well, he's a 25 year old virgin so obviously something is wrong with him. Maybe he met the person across the world on the internet and they aren't a stranger but someone the person loves a lot.

I'm sorry, I didn't realize I needed to develop the story. I just wanted to see what the writers on this forum could do. I thought this subforum was for people to have stories written for them by smut authors trying to refine their craft.
I know that I personally could've written an amazing story given the few details that I provided. But again, I guess you guys have a kneejerk reaction at anything that doesn't sound 'normal' and hence won't be easy to masturbate to.

 

[KiaraNightshadow]

Creativity is awesome. Really, it's something that I highly value. But if you're being creative but just throwing things in there for the hell of it, it's just sloppy.

Okay, so you do just want it to be a smut porn story. That's fine. I return to my original point about it being boring. But whatever, right? Personal preference--you can do what you want. Both of us are on Lit for different reasons, and we both want to assume that everyone else is here for the same reason we are. I want plot, you want smut.

It's a phase, really.

As far as deep throating with a tounge massage: workable, but incredibly difficult and highly unlikely. When you deep throat, you have to widen your throat to fit everything, which makes your tongue tense up, which in turn makes it very difficult to move. Realisticly, there probably aren't that many people who can pull something like that off, even with an average man's length.

Anyway, in order for a writer to refine their craft, they have to work beyond the details of sex. Character development is important, too, for example.

 

[smut_glut]

: /
sigh
to be continued.

 

[LindsayRae]

Creativity is awesome. Really, it's something that I highly value. But if you're being creative but just throwing things in there for the hell of it, it's just sloppy.

Amen.

Sci-Fi isn't my favorite genre. I was using it as an example. An idea can seem far fetched or even odd; however, the great authors can pull off those ideas and make them sound real and believable. That's where the genius lies.

 

[KiaraNightshadow]

: /
sigh
to be continued.

I'm not trying to discourage you. It's like a sin for me to keep people from writing.

Do as ye will; just be flexible about it.

 

[KiaraNightshadow]

Amen.

Sci-Fi isn't my favorite genre. I was using it as an example. An idea can seem far fetched or even odd; however, the great authors can pull off those ideas and make them sound real and believable. That's where the genius lies.

Great example: The Dresden Files by Jim Butcher. He started off throwing a bunch of cliches in a book about a wizard PI just to prove to a Prof of his that it would suck, but it ended up turning into something great.

But that's just me getting distracted.

 

[mr_fred_flinta]

tihihi
if nothing else, this thread has definetly given me a good few minutes
and some people I woulnd t mind seeing more from... and maybe, just maybe,, some I wouldnt mind not seeing soo much more from

but as mentioned somewhere along this thread, in there between hurt feelings, protectionism and "dont get me wrong" - I call it broccoli, you say broccoli... (I guess htat would have made much more sence actually hearing it the way I was thinking it....)

and by the way - thanks! and merry x on you too!!

 

[SouthernRunner]

PaintChips

Did your Sister ever used to feed you paint chips as you laid in grass staring at the sun. Are you sex-handicapped person where you only good sex is sex no one can do? or think of? Loving the what is a trib? I LOL for a good minute or 2...

 

[turner28]

I have pasted idea in Word and will work on it this weekend. I will post some as soon as I get something workable.

E.T.

 

[LindsayRae]

I have pasted idea in Word and will work on it this weekend. I will post some as soon as I get something workable.

E.T.

In your posts you say "no smut" as if that should be catagorized with "no incest", "no pedopbhilia", and "no bestiality"...yet smut is part of this man's screen name...and you're going to write him a story? lol