Okay here are the problems.
First however I'll address ER's statement. It's bad form to write a sequel without permission. That said no money is changing hands so the legal weapons they could successfully wield against you are fairly limited.
More importantly it's easier to jsut to kinda expy your way around it so everybody knows what you're doing but you're technically covered. Because the Expendables, A-Team, Red and Losers aren't all totally the exact same movie.
Besides you never know what you might get if you ask. Some people simply don't mind or would even be flattered.
To the OP. Nobody knows what Nakie Frankie is and you should assume everybody is utterly clueless about the entire thing. You didn't even give us a link back to the original story which is an absolute must so people can read it. You should really summarize it a a lot more than you do. This isn't like most of your requests where you are giving us something vague like "I want to see Godzilla fight a butcher knife with legs." This is "I want Pacific Rim 2" which again you should assume nobody saw. Even if you're talking about the biggest franchise in history it's still wise to give us enough to work with that if you found someone who's been living under a rock for the last several decades and honest to god has no idea what the Matrix is that they can at least get a general idea of what you want. Sometimes people find a concept interesting enough to do the research to help you. Not often mind you but you really want to maximize your chances.
