BlackSnake
Anaconda
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- Aug 20, 2002
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Yo, I'm writting a story about a guy who meet a lady in a bar. She is depressed because she has been laidoff from her job and is facing eviction. She has tried everything she could, but is at the end of her rope. In drowning her sorrows, she decides to go home with the guy. They fuck like crazy. After sex, the guy decides that he would try and help her out. Eventhough she hardly knows him, she thinks about his proposition to move in with him. Catch, she has a daughter and a son. The daughter, older, lives at home and can't find a job. The son flunks out of college at is back home. After a few more visits to the guys home and the eviction fast approaching, she decides to take him up on his offer. The lady brings her daughter to meet the guy and there is instant attraction between them. The lady doesn't notice. Neither do the son. The lady affairs are taken care of and she, her daughter, and son moves into the man's home. The man fucks the lady constantly while flirting with the daughter. At the first opportunity the man fucks the daughter and their affair begins. The man is fucking both the mother and daughter, without the mother knowing. The son however finds out. He confronts his sister, who he has a secret crush on. Blackmails her into having sex with him while continuing her affair with the man. The four of them playing around while junk, the son gets the mother turned on while playing touchy-feely and pulling each other's clothes down. In compromising positions where the son is holding down the daughter and the man is holding down the mother, cocks are briefly inserted. More laughter and playing ensues afterward. The son is holding down the mother and the man is holding down the daughter, again cocks are inserted. Ooops, follows this as the play continues. Next chasing and running around the house. The son catches and pins the mother on a bed and his cock is inserted. This time they fuck, but vow to keep it a secret. In another room, the man fucks the daughter. After words the man takes the lady to bed for more sex and the son has sex with the daughter. The son is the only one who knows of all the affairs.
I'm writing this first in the third person. I'm sending finished piece to Lexium and she is going to write it in the first person from the mother's point of view. I'm going to rewrite it in the first person from the man's point of view. What I'm looking for is a couple of author's to rewrite the story in the first person from the daughter and son's points of view. I will send all the finished third person version of the story, so you can use it to rewrite the story from the first person point of view.
The goal here is to see the same story written differently by different authors from different prospectives.
Takers?
I'm writing this first in the third person. I'm sending finished piece to Lexium and she is going to write it in the first person from the mother's point of view. I'm going to rewrite it in the first person from the man's point of view. What I'm looking for is a couple of author's to rewrite the story in the first person from the daughter and son's points of view. I will send all the finished third person version of the story, so you can use it to rewrite the story from the first person point of view.
The goal here is to see the same story written differently by different authors from different prospectives.
Takers?
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