Story o' mine...

BouncyGirl

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This is a story that I wrote a while ago. I think it's fairly good, but no one's replied to it yet. What do you guys think about it?
 
It's fine if you're into Britney Spears.

If you're looking for additions, I suggest you begin by adding a few of your own. Some people, myself included, don't always feel entirely comfortable adding onto the introductory thread. One is not always certain where the editor wants the story to go. Also, one sometimes assumes that if the original author isn't adding additional threads, it means they've disappeared and so any submissions will sit in limbo and never be approved.

Continue the story yourself is my advice to you. Give people more decision points to lead off from. You should see better results.
 
I looked at Gal Pals - it was pretty good for a first thread (could be fleshed out with more descriptions). Glanced at your other stories too. They seem pretty good and I will be back.

There are a few things that you can do to a story to get it noticed.

One is to keep adding threads to it. That way it keeps appearing near the top of the "freshest stories". Also it shows you're interested in it. As Gystex says, with so many stories around, people are a bit suspicious of stories that are just one thread dep. They look like they've been abandoned.

Secondly, you can contribute to other people's stories (hint!). Most of us on this forum work on a thread-for-a-thread principle. In other words, if you write a thread for somebody else, they will probably write for you (not a guarantee, but a principle that generally works).

Also, posting regularly on these forums (great that you found them btw) will get you noticed and part of our little community - especially if you put links to your stories as part of your sig (see below).

On the subject of signatures, loved the bouncygirl avatar!
 
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It's good

I think the story is well written and a good intro thread. The only problem I have is I find Brittney Spears to be about as nasty as someone can be. She just looks and acts like such a bitch that I can't get worked up enough to write anything about her.

Sorry!

:D
 
Matrix Quiz

Well I took the quiz too. I found it a little short, but none-the-less, here is which character it said I was closely matched to.

Cypher, from "The Matrix." Selfish, disllusioned, you are misguided at times. You deviate from the "right" path.

Well there ya go...

-Tim (niceguy2002tim)
 
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