LovesDancing
Virgin
- Joined
- Jun 8, 2022
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- 28
I'm looking for someone to look at my story and give me ideas on how to improve it. It's a part 4 of a story line, and the first three parts were well received. A story before that was given only a 2.5 rating, which has made me reluctant to put my story out there without help. The story line has the title Helping Melinda. If I could ask for someone to look at what I've gotten done with part four so far I'd really appreciate your feedback.
