Story idea

[sarahcombs36]

I am new here, but I have an idea for a story.

A woman tells a tale of a wild and sex filled 24 hours. She wakes up horny and her day is filled with one sexual situation after another. It starts with her waking in the middle of the night masturbating, then to the shower, flirty neighbor, shopping, lunch with friends, car wash, traffic cop, dance club, etc....

 

[siddey1]

you just sound horny...can you pm me..

 

[sarahcombs36]

you just sound horny...can you pm me..

hahaha.....no but I get that way often

 

[mjl2010]

She wakes up horny and her day is filled with one sexual situation after another. It starts with her waking in the middle of the night masturbating, then to the shower, flirty neighbor, shopping, lunch with friends, car wash, traffic cop, dance club, etc....

Believe it or not, you've just outlined a story. Just take it one step at a time. The last sentence especially. The only thing you left out was what happened when she got home from the club.

Welcome to Lit and watch out for the HNG's. I see you've attracted one already.



MJL

 

[tickledkitty]

Welcome to Lit and watch out for the HNG's. I see you've attracted one already.

HNG's?

 

[DarkBee]

Sounds like a porn version of '24' to me... perhaps a chain story where every writer writes about 1 hour of her day?

 

[snooper]

Sounds like a porn version of '24' to me... perhaps a chain story where every writer writes about 1 hour of her day?

The basic premise of 24 was prevention. For the porn version you would have to turn it on its head and make the basic idea achievement. Reminds me of the old story about IBM: when the boss needed a baby in a month's time his underlings went out and made nine women pregnant. Perhaps the heroïne needs to get pregnant quickly to qualify for an inheritance from a rich dying grandparent who wants to become a great-grandparent before (s)he dies? Maybe there are two grandchildren competing to be the first one pregnant for a few (or a lot of) million dollars/pounds/euros or billions of yen. Perhaps one of them is a promiscuous slut who is happy to have sex with umpteen men in a day, while the other is prim and proper and has to force herself? Set in the near future, and bending the physiological science a little, give them access to a pregnancy test kit that tells you within an hour of intercourse whether you are pregnant. Of course it takes a number of tries before it works.

I don't mean to interfere with sarahcombs36's original idea, but just feeling horny isn't really a believable background. Please feel free to use these thoughts if you want - it isn't really my sort of story at all.