Story Idea

[gamer9643]

I have an idea for a story that any of you can use as long as you do it justice because part of this happened in real life to me.

while i was in highschool i was going to my next class (Printshop) after luch and was passing through an empty hall when three girls walked by me. just when they walked by me the one in the middle with no hesitiation blurted out "I have a vagina". being only eighteen and shy at the time i personally did nothing and stood there in a daze for about 3 to 4 minutes before i could think.

now in fantasy land i would tell them "you want me to teach you how to use it?" or something along those lines. I have spent many nights in a fog remember those girls walking around the corner giggling imaganiong what might of been.

all i ask in return if you make a story out of this is in the end a little credit for it did partially come out of my personal life.

Also if someone makes this story please notify me so I can read it

 

[ABSTRUSE]

Why don't you just write it yourself?

 

[Guest]

Hardly seems a story. Reads more like a 3-second bit in a teen sitcom.

Perdita

 

[Norajane]

now in fantasy land i would tell them "you want me to teach you how to use it?" or something along those lines. I have spent many nights in a fog remember those girls walking around the corner giggling imaganiong what might of been.

Out of curiousity, what do the girls say in your fantasy land when you come out with that?

I don't see them saying, yeah, let's start with the teaching right now! I see them laughing at you, instead, but maybe my imagination is limited.

 

[cloudy]

I have an idea for a story that any of you can use as long as you do it justice because part of this happened in real life to me.

while i was in highschool i was going to my next class (Printshop) after luch and was passing through an empty hall when three girls walked by me. just when they walked by me the one in the middle with no hesitiation blurted out "I have a vagina". being only eighteen and shy at the time i personally did nothing and stood there in a daze for about 3 to 4 minutes before i could think.

now in fantasy land i would tell them "you want me to teach you how to use it?" or something along those lines. I have spent many nights in a fog remember those girls walking around the corner giggling imaganiong what might of been.

all i ask in return if you make a story out of this is in the end a little credit for it did partially come out of my personal life.

Also if someone makes this story please notify me so I can read it

I don't mean to be completely rude, but....how old are you?

 

[Colleen Thomas]

You might try posting to the story ideas forum. The majority of authors on the Ah seem to be struggling with getting their own ideas written than with finding new material.

 

[impressive]

Out of curiousity, what do the girls say in your fantasy land when you come out with that?

"Oh, yes, studly boy-man! Enlighten us with your extensive knowledge of the feminine form. Give us pleasures never before imagined. Make us quiver with anticipation. Titillate us with your unparalleled skills. Or, go beat off, loser."

 

[Salvor-Hardon]

"Oh, yes, studly boy-man! Enlighten us with your extensive knowledge of the feminine form. Give us pleasures never before imagined. Make us quiver with anticipation. Titillate us with your unparalleled skills. Or, go beat off, loser."

Ya know, the girl I asked to the prom said that exact same thing!

How'd you know?

 

[cloudy]

"Oh, yes, studly boy-man! Enlighten us with your extensive knowledge of the feminine form. Give us pleasures never before imagined. Make us quiver with anticipation. Titillate us with your unparalleled skills. Or, go beat off, loser."

Imp, I adore you.

"studly boy-man" *snort*

 

[ABSTRUSE]

Ya know, the girl I asked to the prom said that exact same thing!

How'd you know?

*Luuuukkkkkkkkeeeeeeeee she is your sister!!! *

 

[Salvor-Hardon]

*Luuuukkkkkkkkeeeeeeeee she is your sister!!! *

Nooooooooooooooooooooooo

but but but...

She's hot! C'mon can't she be like a 2nd cousin or something......

Luuuuuke she is your roomate's brother's doctor's secretary's best friend's neighbor.

 

[ABSTRUSE]

Nooooooooooooooooooooooo

but but but...

She's hot! C'mon can't she be like a 2nd cousin or something......

Luuuuuke she is your roomate's brother's doctor's secretary's best friend's neighbor.

*Luke...she has crabs....and not the ones from Chesapeake bay*

 

[gamer9643]

ok, ok im 22 curently and was held back once in junior high and 3 times in high. and dont laugh at me. also i would right it myself but I lack the ability to put it in writing. besides i thought the idea of a foursome with where a guy fucks three 18-19 year olds would be hot. especially since if my memory serves me corectly they looked like they could be models. details, small tits on all of them and they had nice asses thats about all i really looked at. i know there hair was all dark though.

 

[Guest]

ok, ok im 22 curently and was held back once in junior high and 3 times in high. and dont laugh at me. also i would right it myself but I lack the ability to put it in writing. besides i thought the idea of a foursome with where a guy fucks three 18-19 year olds would be hot. especially since if my memory serves me corectly they looked like they could be models. details, small tits on all of them and they had nice asses thats about all i really looked at. i know there hair was all dark though.

I am not laughing at you but I must say you are the most annoying newbie I've read in a long time. I seriously thought you were underage for this forum (it's not like proof of age is required). If you took the time to read your own posts really thoughtfully you would see that you give no reason or impetus for anyone to respond except as above (you've become a joke to many on this board). Your "idea" is not unique in anyway, no one knows you personally, so why would anyone write something just for you? I say that because from your posts/threads you seem to require mostly attention. Honestly, my intention is not to be rude but I know of no other way to get my point across except by plain speaking. Now I shall put you on ignore.


Perdita

 

[Salvor-Hardon]

*Luke...she has crabs....and not the ones from Chesapeake bay*

So the melted butter in my pants is no good? Damn.

 

[gamer9643]

im sorry and this will be my LAST post. I just thought it would make a somewhat decent story and PS it wasnt an idea those girls did say that to me i just was to stupid to think of anything to say back to them.

 

[Norajane]

So the melted butter in my pants is no good? Damn.

Melted butter? Is that what they're calling it these days?

 

[Norajane]

"Oh, yes, studly boy-man! Enlighten us with your extensive knowledge of the feminine form. Give us pleasures never before imagined. Make us quiver with anticipation. Titillate us with your unparalleled skills. Or, go beat off, loser."

*snicker*

Yup, sounds about right...

 

[impressive]

So the melted butter in my pants is no good? Damn.

ghee

 

[ABSTRUSE]

im sorry and this will be my LAST post. I just thought it would make a somewhat decent story and PS it wasnt an idea those girls did say that to me i just was to stupid to think of anything to say back to them.

You don't have to stop posting just ask questions about writing if you are serious about it.

 

[Salvor-Hardon]

Melted butter? Is that what they're calling it these days?

LOL

ummmm yeah..... yeah... want some popcorn?

 

[ABSTRUSE]

LOL

ummmm yeah..... yeah... want some popcorn?

Letch.

 

[Colleen Thomas]

im sorry and this will be my LAST post. I just thought it would make a somewhat decent story and PS it wasnt an idea those girls did say that to me i just was to stupid to think of anything to say back to them.

No one is suggesting you cease posting. Merely that you consider what you post. The choice is yours of course, but the Ah community has a lot to offer to anyone who is interested in writing or just in a freindly place to discuss things.

 

[NoJo]

ABSTRUSE has a vagina. End of story.

 

[exiledmaster]

im sorry and this will be my LAST post. I just thought it would make a somewhat decent story and PS it wasnt an idea those girls did say that to me i just was to stupid to think of anything to say back to them.

Here's a suggestion.

Don't try to write the story.

Tell us what happens next. Ad what happens after. Then tell us how the story will finish.

Then you'll have a structure. It might be a plot, or it might just be bare bones around which someone can create a character sketch. But if you tell us what happens you'll make it yours.