story idea would this work?

[Redd10]

high school, end of junior year, both characters are 18.

Guy-nerdy, Christian upbringing, hard worker likable guy
Girl-preppy but very socialable and friendly to everybody, but slutty and has a very self serving view of sex. Just brook up.

Prior relationship, there friendly they talk with each other and they are both on the track team. The guy is not very good but the girl is.

After celebrating a big win in a track meet everyone is invited over for a party. During which they play a game of truth or dare in which the guy reveals he has no problem giving oral to a gf if he gets nothing in return.

This convinces some of the girl's friends to see how many times she can cash in on this poor sucker. She agrees and starts to "date' the guy over the summer. Slowly, she begins to devlelop real feelings for the guy. They complement each other, helping the guy to be more out going and the girl to be more level headed. But then everything comes crashing down as the truth is reveal to the guy. After that, I know where to take the story.

Now here's my problem. how do I pass this guy off as a sucker without falling into the trap of making him look like a complete loser?

 

[emap]

Change it to Senior year, your both graduating soon, and she dates you over the summer before you go off to college, or your juniors in college though would require an upgrade on the ages.

As you have it listed, they aren't 18, your just saying 18 to try and get it accepted.

 

[bisexplicit]

Change it to Senior year, your both graduating soon, and she dates you over the summer before you go off to college, or your juniors in college though would require an upgrade on the ages.

As you have it listed, they aren't 18, your just saying 18 to try and get it accepted.

Hah. I was totally gonna say something like this. Lit police.



To the threadstarter: Make him dorky but sweet. Nerdy, yet easily excited, genuine, and generally nice/romantic. That's how the chick flicks pull it off, anyhow.

 

[coochie]

Make it that the guy does not offer his oral talents, but the girl who believes that she can get him to go down on her and have him to thank her for it.

Now she is getting more pleasure than she thought she would.

Because the guy is with the girl, he begins to gain friends and become more confident. Because the girl has been bragging to her friends about how he makes her toes curl, more girls want to spread their legs for him.

In the mean time, the girl starts having real feelings for the guy.

Now the guy has lots girls standing in line to spread their legs for the guy's tongue lashing.

The girl then tries to get the guy to see what is going on, but he doesn't see it.

until, he tries to get something for himself and the girl he is with refuses.

The guy is broken, but the girl goes to comfort him and then they start a real relationship.

It's a Disney story

 

[only_more_so]

I don't think a conservative christian type would say he would go down on a girl without getting anything in return. More likely he would say he wouldn't have sex, but would cave in and say he might finger a girl, and cave in further and say he might lick a girl. The girls would say he would demand a blowjob in return and he would say he couldn't ask a girl to do that.

To make it seem like he isn't a loser, it is important that this is something he wants to do and isn't tricked into doing. Maybe the first time she asks him to give her oral, but after that he starts asking to do it to her. Basically to not be a loser he has to get something out of it, even if it is as simple as he really the power it gives him over her body.

 

[SexSweetheart]

I agree, they should be seniors.

The boy can be very handsome but shy.

 

[gargouille]

I've no idea how to make him not seem loserish but...

I've noticed a lot of kids these days are "technical" virgins; that is they've done everything BUT penis in vagina sex. What if he took that silly (imo) "true love wait" pledges which is why he's okay giving oral?

 

[SexSweetheart]

I've no idea how to make him not seem loserish but...

I've noticed a lot of kids these days are "technical" virgins; that is they've done everything BUT penis in vagina sex. What if he took that silly (imo) "true love waits" pledges which is why he's okay giving oral?

This would work. I number of people don't have sex because of their beliefs. They do some petting and cuddling and nothing more.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

I guess both characters could be 18 at the end of junior year if it was written in that they both were held back a year. lol

 

[Redd10]

Make it that the guy does not offer his oral talents, but the girl who believes that she can get him to go down on her and have him to thank her for it.

Now she is getting more pleasure than she thought she would.

Because the guy is with the girl, he begins to gain friends and become more confident. Because the girl has been bragging to her friends about how he makes her toes curl, more girls want to spread their legs for him.

In the mean time, the girl starts having real feelings for the guy.

Now the guy has lots girls standing in line to spread their legs for the guy's tongue lashing.

The girl then tries to get the guy to see what is going on, but he doesn't see it.

until, he tries to get something for himself and the girl he is with refuses.

The guy is broken, but the girl goes to comfort him and then they start a real relationship.

It's a Disney story

that is almost the same exact idea from "Confession of a Teenage Pussy Eater"

 

[TheeGoatPig]

I guess both characters could be 18 at the end of junior year if it was written in that they both were held back a year. lol

I was held back and turned 18 at the beginning of senior year. I don't know if it would work (though I did graduate with a few people who were a year or more older than even I was).