Story Idea: The Invisible Pervert

[Nephlim14]

A young prankster in college discovers he has the power to turn invisible, and uses this ability to terrorize the women on campus with flashing, and groping. When he is being hunted by a group of freshmen girls, and boys, he faces exposure, and humiliation.

Possible Plot Tags: CFNM, CMNM

If anyone is interested in writing making a story based on this idea; please reply.

 

[hashtag45]

I like this one.
Funniest idea and has potential for a lot of humour

 

[Nephlim14]

I like this one.
Funniest idea and has potential for a lot of humour

Would you possibly be interested in writing it?

 

[hashtag45]

oh, no,
I am not an english speaker, and I struggle with grammar and syntax too much to be able to write literature.
But I used to write in my own language, during my postgrad. studies, and I like to post here due to nostalgia.

Thanks for that. I just wanted to express myself - that I loved the idea.

 

[Hypoxia]

If they can't see him, how can they find him? If he thinks he's being hunted, won't he just halt on-campus activities and move into a larger realm? If he's 'caught', can't he just go invisible again and escape humiliation? Wouldn't he make a good VP candidate for Trump?

PS: This is my LIT post #4800. Only twelve more to go.

 

[Mello_SixtyNine]

A young prankster in college discovers he has the power to turn invisible, and uses this ability to terrorize the women on campus with flashing, and groping. When he is being hunted by a group of freshmen girls, and boys, he faces exposure, and humiliation.

Possible Plot Tags: CFNM, CMNM

How do you flash someone when you're invisible?

Also, If he crosses the street & gets killed by a car that didn't see him, does his body become visible again, or does his invisible corpse keep getting run over multiple times until he's just a bloody, invisible paste on the road?

On another note, you have 30 different story idea threads on the first page alone. Do you plan on writing any of these?

It's not that hard. Just start typing & if you got a hard-on, then you're doing something right.

I just had an idea for a story earlier today and 2,500+ words poured out so far. You do realize that nobody is going to write any of your ideas, right? You've got to do it yourself if you want to see any of these through to completion.

 

[hashtag45]

You Debbie Downers are destroying the funniest idea that I read today.

They can find him, even if they can't see him. One example: while he is flashing someone, the victim is instructed to either prick him or to throw a powder with specific properties, on him.

And he could flash someone despite having this power to be invisible. For ex., he could turn his "invisibility" on and off on a whim, or he could have a cloak that makes him invisible.

But what would be funnier, imo, would be if he could "flash" only certain parts of his body. Let's say a girl is sitting on a bench and sees a floating pennis in front of her.

 

[Hypoxia]

Oh fuck, I missed the "invisible flashing" part and concentrated on the groping. Even that is problematic. He's invisible. He stealthily sneaks up beside her, careful not to crush twigs and leaves with his bare feet. (Or does he wear transparent Kevlar moccasins?) He grasps her breasts. She screams and pushes against the unseen hand, feels the unseen arm, kicks out at the unseen assailant (she's taken martial arts training), lands multiple blows on the unseen body.

No, our invisible assailant must use other tricks. Sneaking invisibly around sorority houses and women's locker rooms through unlocked doors, oggling babes in showers and stealing their panties, fingering them while they sleep -- until they awaken screaming. Hmmm, no it's better if he just steals their panties and jewelry and cellphones.

 

[Nephlim14]

How do you flash someone when you're invisible?

Also, If he crosses the street & gets killed by a car that didn't see him, does his body become visible again, or does his invisible corpse keep getting run over multiple times until he's just a bloody, invisible paste on the road?

On another note, you have 30 different story idea threads on the first page alone. Do you plan on writing any of these?

It's not that hard. Just start typing & if you got a hard-on, then you're doing something right.

I just had an idea for a story earlier today and 2,500+ words poured out so far. You do realize that nobody is going to write any of your ideas, right? You've got to do it yourself if you want to see any of these through to completion.

1. He can flash people by turning his invisibility on and off.
2. If he did get run over, his invisibility wold turn off.
3. I have tried writing them, but I don't have the time or creativity to work on them all.
4. Plus if I write it, it becomes less arousing to me, and....it's just better off if I give it to professionals.

P.S. There are a few writers who are showing interest.

 

[Nephlim14]

If they can't see him, how can they find him? If he thinks he's being hunted, won't he just halt on-campus activities and move into a larger realm? If he's 'caught', can't he just go invisible again and escape humiliation? Wouldn't he make a good VP candidate for Trump?

PS: This is my LIT post #4800. Only twelve more to go.

1. They could find him when he turns his invisibility off to flash them, or use things like flour or paint to disrupt his invisibilty or something like that.

2. Why would he leave the campus,that's his favorite territory.

 

[Hypoxia]

When he turns off his invisibility to flash he's identifiable and catchable, much too vulnerable for even a semi-rational player. No, flashing while invisible is a very bad idea. Better to sneak into dorm rooms, into the beds of sleeping victims, and insinuate himself into their dreams and vaginas. And then... his invisibility ability derives from a genetic quirk. He fucks many coeds whilst invisible. Not all get abortions. Are his offspring also invisible? Where does that lead?

 

[Nephlim14]

When he turns off his invisibility to flash he's identifiable and catchable, much too vulnerable for even a semi-rational player. No, flashing while invisible is a very bad idea. Better to sneak into dorm rooms, into the beds of sleeping victims, and insinuate himself into their dreams and vaginas. And then... his invisibility ability derives from a genetic quirk. He fucks many coeds whilst invisible. Not all get abortions. Are his offspring also invisible? Where does that lead?

The fact that it makes him catchable is the whole point, as for the identity, you could say he wears a mask. Also, he's not a rapist, and the story is suppose to be about him being an infamous flasher that gets tracked down and "punished" by a group of (18 yr old) boys and girls, and the fact that turning off his invisibility makes him vulnerable aids that part of the plot. He's not suppose to be "untouchable"

 

[Mello_SixtyNine]

1. He can flash people by turning his invisibility on and off.
2. If he did get run over, his invisibility wold turn off.
3. I have tried writing them, but I don't have the time or creativity to work on them all.
4. Plus if I write it, it becomes less arousing to me, and....it's just better off if I give it to professionals.

P.S. There are a few writers who are showing interest.

The idea that you don't have time does not hold water. It's not like you're on a deadline from a publishing company. This is Literotica, you could spend a year writing a one-page story if you want. Why don't you start with your favorite story idea and just write it. Don't really care if it's one page or ten. Don't care if you think you're creative or not. Just write something...anything to completion.

On another note, there are no professionals here.
I repeat, this is Literotica.

 

[Nephlim14]

The idea that you don't have time does not hold water. It's not like you're on a deadline from a publishing company. This is Literotica, you could spend a year writing a one-page story if you want. Why don't you start with your favorite story idea and just write it. Don't really care if it's one page or ten. Don't care if you think you're creative or not. Just write something...anything to completion.

On another note, there are no professionals here.
I repeat, this is Literotica.

It's not that I'm trying to dump them on someone, it's just that I have been on the Literotica site for some time now, and along the way I have found numerous types of stories that have become my preferance including:

Exhibitionism, (Occsionally) Nonconsent/Reluctance, Gay Male, First Time, and SciFi Stories about:
1. Streakers/Flashers/Sharkers getting caught, used/abused, and left lightly humiliated
2. CFNM Stories where exhibitionistic guys get caught, sexually teased, and abused like on the websites.
3. College guys either losing their virginity, partaking in naked rituals that go wrong, or being involved in wild sex fueled frat parties.
4. Werewolves (like the Lycans from Underworld) indulging in animalstic (metaphotrically) sex, partying, and fights all in the buff.
5. Historical Stories involving Vikings, Pirates, Greek/Roman Soldiers, and virgin targets (male or female)
6. College stories about a reluctant boys getting seduced by gay roommates or frat brothers.
3. Stories about aliens temporarily abducting young men or women for sexual experiments.
4. Mischievous Fae or Fairy tale creatures sexually toying with young people
5. Young Bikers having their way with young men/women (whether it be consensual or not)
6. Werewolves (like the Lycans from Underworld) seducing or ravishing young reluctant men and women for sexual indulgence.

I have a few more I could list, but 'll probably do that later

There have been a few stories that fall along one of these types, and I have been posting ideas because it was my way of requesting for similar types of tales.

Also, when I said "professionals", I meant members on this site who have spent more time on the site than me, and have more skill in writing erotic stories (I've never done it before).

P.S. I am working on a story series of my own.

 

[Nephlim14]

The idea that you don't have time does not hold water. It's not like you're on a deadline from a publishing company. This is Literotica, you could spend a year writing a one-page story if you want. Why don't you start with your favorite story idea and just write it. Don't really care if it's one page or ten. Don't care if you think you're creative or not. Just write something...anything to completion.

On another note, there are no professionals here.
I repeat, this is Literotica.

I apologize if my proposals came off as offensive.

 

[Mello_SixtyNine]

I'm not offended. But when you carpet bomb the story thread with story ideas, it just gives off the vibe that you have no intention to write any yourself and you just want others to do your bidding.

Kinda like a really hot chick that expects guys to fulfill her every whim because she's hot.

 

[Hypoxia]

The fact that it makes him catchable is the whole point, as for the identity, you could say he wears a mask.

In invisible mask? If he's invisible and the mask isn't, that's rather a giveaway -- look, a floating mask! If the mask is invisible and he materializes, he's not masked -- look, it's Wilhelm!

Also, he's not a rapist, and the story is suppose to be about him being an infamous flasher that gets tracked down and "punished" by a group of (18 yr old) boys and girls, and the fact that turning off his invisibility, makes him vulnerable aids that part of the plot. He's not suppose to be "untouchable"

But if he DOES switch off invisibility in a situation allowing his capture and punishment, that makes him an idiot. If he's a non-idiot and is threatened with capture he need merely go invisible again, and escape.

Okay, he's not a rapist. He's a nice, moral guy with quirks. Right. He never thinks of exploiting his power / ability beyond playing flashing pranks. Right. Are readers going to buy that he's a sweet one-trick dumbass?

EDIT: As you might gather, I'm not a big fan of stories about people with 'powers'. Nothing personal. I tend to approach those as farces, like Randy Randy (The Pornomancer). That's just me.

 

[Nephlim14]

I'm not offended. But when you carpet bomb the story thread with story ideas, it just gives off the vibe that you have no intention to write any yourself and you just want others to do your bidding.

Kinda like a really hot chick that expects guys to fulfill her every whim because she's hot.

I'm not expecting everyone, to "do my bidding", all the ideas I showed were just the types of stories I wish to find more of on the site, preferably from the author that wrote the initial ones. I administered so many at once because I had kept the ideas pent up in my mind for a long time.

 

[hashtag45]

I read stories on this website, and I thought that some of them were real gems, others not so much,
but I always wondered (and perhaps this is not pc of me to ask):
What's the incentive? For writers to post them here.
Because, as I understand it, they are not paid, and stories sometimes get stolen or plagiarized on other sites.

 

[Hypoxia]

What's the incentive? For writers to post them here.
Because, as I understand it, they are not paid, and stories sometimes get stolen or plagiarized on other sites.

Dr Johnson said, "Only a fool writes, if not for money," so we have many fools here, meself included. Why do authors post? Each likely has their own motive(s). Many write because we MUST -- words just force their way from us. Some may be 'practicing' or "honing their craft". I've learnt shitloads since I started. Some may intend to go pro. Some want to arouse or provoke or soothe or trick readers. Some may honestly not know why -- they just do.

Once we write, what's the incentive to continue? Speaking for nobody else: I started out wanting high scores, lots of Red H's, acclaim, yada yada. An intense 1-bombing cured me of that. Now I write (when I do) just to gather eyeballs and responses. Stories in popular categories with hot titles can gain MANY MANY views. There's a certain ego-gratification in huge audiences and lots of feedback, pro or con. If my story provokes a comment, I've done my job.

There have been more than a few threads on this subject. I'll stop now.

 

[MatthewVett]

I read stories on this website, and I thought that some of them were real gems, others not so much,
but I always wondered (and perhaps this is not pc of me to ask):
What's the incentive? For writers to post them here.
Because, as I understand it, they are not paid, and stories sometimes get stolen or plagiarized on other sites.

I do it for fun and feedback, mostly. I love getting feedback on my stories, and I enjoy turning fantasies into text.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Oh wow, you guys threw a party and forgot to invite the Emperor of Erotica, the Sultan of Smut, the Prince of Pornography, the Duke of Debauchery, the one and only Sean Renaud? I'm crushed. Positively crushed.

Let's see if I can keep this short. First Neph, I normally want to be furious with people who write posts of "here are fifty ideas I have rattling around my empty skull" you have shown me the error of my ways and I apologize to those I've wronged in the past. Its worse to post fifty ideas separately.

Second Neph I'm reading you here. Stick with the fact that you want to read the story not write it. Your English and Grammar are more than passable. In fact 90% of the people I hear claiming that English is their twenty second language and they can't write in it are simply incorrect. Hell it's been my experience that reasonably educated people for whom English is a second language speak better English than most Americans. Perhaps a little overly formal like the one guy on the planet who actually knows when to use a semicolon instead of a comma or has never heard of a contraction and thus insists on saying 'will not' instead of 'won't' and other formal rules that nobody comfortable in the language ever follows.

That said catching an invisible man isn't really THAT difficult assuming you know the game you're playing. Powder, liquids and other things generally make them visible. So do foot prints in things like mud or water or other similar substances. IF you are reasonable certain the invisible man is harmless (either because you're too stupid to consider it or because you realize if so and so was going to hurt you they would have let you get run over by that car instead of shoving you out of the way.

Invisibility like most super powers requires some degree of conscious effort so if they died or lost consciousness they would revert to visible. Granted sometimes it's somewhat involuntary. Violet from the Incredibles and Sue Storm/Ms. Fantastic (whom Violet was clearly based on. In fact the Incredibles are clearly based on the Fantastic Four with Human Torch apparently swapped elementally for Frozone and in the family for a speedster) both go invisible when embarassed by reflex but it's still something that gets turned on.

As for clothing and the such while this varies dependent on all sorts of rules that are not always consistent (Even within the same work) invisibility generally includes your clothing and held items at the time you go invisible. So no need for super magical clothing and if there is whatever gave them the power they understand well enough to make the appropriate gear to go with it. That's simple enough. But unless it's stated otherwise it's just a required secondary super power. (Go Read TvTropes. The short answer is most super powers have other powers that the character must have in order for the primary power to function as presented.) It's hardly worthy of worrying about.

The idea is actually intriguing.

 

[Mello_SixtyNine]

Oh wow, you guys threw a party and forgot to invite the Emperor of Erotica, the Sultan of Smut, the Prince of Pornography, the Duke of Debauchery, the one and only Sean Renaud? I'm crushed. Positively crushed.

Let's see if I can keep this short. First Neph, I normally want to be furious with people who write posts of "here are fifty ideas I have rattling around my empty skull" you have shown me the error of my ways and I apologize to those I've wronged in the past. Its worse to post fifty ideas separately.

Second Neph I'm reading you here. Stick with the fact that you want to read the story not write it. Your English and Grammar are more than passable. In fact 90% of the people I hear claiming that English is their twenty second language and they can't write in it are simply incorrect. Hell it's been my experience that reasonably educated people for whom English is a second language speak better English than most Americans. Perhaps a little overly formal like the one guy on the planet who actually knows when to use a semicolon instead of a comma or has never heard of a contraction and thus insists on saying 'will not' instead of 'won't' and other formal rules that nobody comfortable in the language ever follows.

That said catching an invisible man isn't really THAT difficult assuming you know the game you're playing. Powder, liquids and other things generally make them visible. So do foot prints in things like mud or water or other similar substances. IF you are reasonable certain the invisible man is harmless (either because you're too stupid to consider it or because you realize if so and so was going to hurt you they would have let you get run over by that car instead of shoving you out of the way.

Invisibility like most super powers requires some degree of conscious effort so if they died or lost consciousness they would revert to visible. Granted sometimes it's somewhat involuntary. Violet from the Incredibles and Sue Storm/Ms. Fantastic (whom Violet was clearly based on. In fact the Incredibles are clearly based on the Fantastic Four with Human Torch apparently swapped elementally for Frozone and in the family for a speedster) both go invisible when embarassed by reflex but it's still something that gets turned on.

As for clothing and the such while this varies dependent on all sorts of rules that are not always consistent (Even within the same work) invisibility generally includes your clothing and held items at the time you go invisible. So no need for super magical clothing and if there is whatever gave them the power they understand well enough to make the appropriate gear to go with it. That's simple enough. But unless it's stated otherwise it's just a required secondary super power. (Go Read TvTropes. The short answer is most super powers have other powers that the character must have in order for the primary power to function as presented.) It's hardly worthy of worrying about.

The idea is actually intriguing.

Tell that to Kevin Bacon and Chevy Chase. They were both stuck involuntarily stuck in their invisible state.

 

[hashtag45]

Many thanks to those who answered.
I was curious because, as I mentioned, I enjoyed doing that too, at one point in my life, but somehow life and the mundane swept me away and I forgot how it felt.

Ta

 

[Sean Renaud]

Tell that to Kevin Bacon and Chevy Chase. They were both stuck involuntarily stuck in their invisible state.

I apologize, generally requires some degree of effort. That was Hollowman and. . .I honestly have no clue what Chevy Case was in. There are others, Buffy had an invisible girl. Well 1.5 since another crops up in the final Season but Buffy just slaps her tells her matters and it stops. It turns out if you live on top of a mystical convergence that if enough people ignore you that you become invisible. . .

So in order to be seen the girl starts engaging in outrageous behavior. And it's like a high she has to keep upping her game because once the guys get used to her flashing them it stops getting their attention and she starts slipping away again. Or you know, a guy with the same problem.