cashmerekitten
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- Aug 3, 2006
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Hello, I am new here, but I have a story idea and am looking for some feedback, advice? I was thinking along the lines of a story with a girl who is kidnapped and sold to a family(brothers 5). She is the sole possesion of the oldest brother, but eventually they all take turns. it's kind of a backwoods situation, where they live in woods near river and no civilization for miles and miles. One by one other girls are kidnapped and brought into situation until all the men have a woman. They are made to be submissive, at least the first one is. It involves spanking, and being tied up outside. During that time she is spanked, fingered and ate out. The oldest brother really falls for her, and is dominant, not excessively cruel or into like pissing on her, but is VERY firm, and keeps her in line. I really don't know squat about dom/sub, and need some input here. I see the end where all the woman are bi, and subs. Some of the men are a little more heavy handed with there woman. At some point in time there is an orgy, threesome ECT... I think it could lean toward a small series. Any input would be helpfull.
