story help: whips and things

[wishfulthinking]

Have someone who needs to be punished [in a story ] What would I use on a beginner that is very gentle? Would it leave marks or just redness? Picture of description welcome.

 

[Norajane]

*grabs popcorn*

 

[cantdog]

Picture welcome!! Lol. I bet.

Good luck with your quest. If no one chimes in, PM the horsie. Shang knows, believe me, and I bet Shang has pictures, too!

 

[wishfulthinking]

If fact, does anyone want to finish the scene for me?????? Please!!!!!

Butterfly wings tormented Audrey’s belly as she entered Father’s chamber. The scrap of parchment Beth had handed her at the morning meal had felt like a stone in her pocket as she waited until after prayers.
Father’s words cut through her. “Come, Audrey. Mother has told me of your concerning lack of progress.” Only then did she notice Beth standing behind him. Beth crossed to Audrey and caught her hands. She didn’t notice the other novice’s swollen lips or crushed skirts. Leaning forward, Beth lightly kissed her on the corner of her mouth before whispering “It will not be so terribly bad, you’ll see.” Audrey searched her friend’s glowing face, seeking reassurance. Beth squeezed her hands once more before leaving. It felt as though a weight pressed down on her as Beth pressed the door silently close behind her.
“Remove your habit.” Taking a deep breath, she reached for the ties at the back at her neck. Her fingers fumbled with them, before the black cloth pooled at her feet. An unsettling warmth grew between her thighs as he merely looked at her in her wispy chemise. He moved to lean against the edge of the desk, his arms crossing over his broad chest.
“Closer.” He motioned with a curl of his finger. She stepped gracefully from her pile of clothes and walked to him, lashes lowered. When she stopped a hand span away he caught her wrist and dragged her closer until she stood with her knees nestled between his. Without warning he caught the hem of her chemise and dragged it up over her head, his warm fingers trailing over her flesh.
She felt his gaze on her, touching her small, high breasts, her belly, her mound. Breathing became a struggle.
“Mother tells me of your wetness, here, when she punishes you.” Two fingers rested lightly against her mons. Her blushes deepened, turning her breasts pink. “She is concerned that your lack of progress may have something to do with your liking of her punishments.”
Audrey felt as though she would expire on the spot from humiliation. She didn’t know where to look.
“Do you like Mother Superior’s punishments, novice?” he murmured, tugging on the ribbon that held her plait. “No answer? Then I will have to discover the truth for myself.”

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[Stella_Omega]

Have someone who needs to be punished [in a story ] What would I use on a beginner that is very gentle? Would it leave marks or just redness? Picture of description welcome.

My suggestion is a fur-covered paddle. The really sexy ones have fur on one side, and shiny sparkly patent leather on the other- you can flip it back and forth, giving her a little sting and then a nice foof, alternately
No marks- some redness, but it will be gone by morning, usually

 

[minsue]

Blowfish is great about giving detailed descriptions of their items.

ex - "The beads provide additional thud and sting (and if you swing it hard enough, little round marks), giving this toy a unique feel."

and

"The tails are long enough to give a good slap without stinging or breaking the skin. "

etc.

 

[wishfulthinking]

Nora and Cant - filthy minded people!! I was asking for a picture of the whip and the whipee, not just the whipee

 

[cantdog]

Nora and Cant - filthy minded people!! I was asking for a picture of the whip and the whipee, not just the whipee

Shang has that. There was a thread, I remember, with a whole series of photos of various floggers and things. Shang had pix and a solid line of good and useful information.

 

[wishfulthinking]

Blowfish is great about giving detailed descriptions of their items.

ex - "The beads provide additional thud and sting (and if you swing it hard enough, little round marks), giving this toy a unique feel."

and

"The tails are long enough to give a good slap without stinging or breaking the skin. "

etc.

Big thanks Min! The site should have a ow meter. I'm thinking maybe a historical equivalent of the thumper.

Thanks Stella. I've already done this historical equivalent of a paddle - a brush. I do like the fur idea though

 

[Stella_Omega]

What's she been getting up to now?
After reading your example, I'd say- a hard paddle, his belt, or a flogger. A little more than cute...
He doesn't have to hit her hard with anyone of these toys. A folded belt makes a lot of noise, even if it doesn't hit hard, because of the sides slapping together.

He can warm her up, too- start off gentle, and as she gets used to it, pick up the pace and intensity. It's amazing how far a first timer can go!
With the right warmup, there would be hardly any bruising, believe it or not. Unless he wanted it, in which case the edges of the belt or paddle would make marks. But again, redness goes away for most people.
Toys that leave lasting, deep bruises, are beaded floggers, single-tail whips or rattan canes.

 

[Norajane]

Nora and Cant - filthy minded people!! I was asking for a picture of the whip and the whipee, not just the whipee

Will we be punished now?

 

[CharleyH]

If fact, does anyone want to finish the scene for me?????? Please!!!!!



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Do what you desire, and finish your own scene. The flog is a gentler tool, though.

 

[minsue]

Big thanks Min! The site should have a ow meter. I'm thinking maybe a historical equivalent of the thumper.

The Stockroom has more of a selection, and therefore more pics, but the descriptions aren't as good.

http://www.stockroom.com/ouch.htm

Not my kink, so personal descriptions or recommendations are beyond me. Plenty here, like the loverly Stella, who should be able to help. Good luck!

 

[wishfulthinking]

Will we be punished now?

Yes, oh yes

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a102/seddd/tt.jpg

(courtesy of blowfish)

 

[AppleBiter]

Might I recommend a cat-o-nine made of soft leather . . almost suede? The smack is fantabulous, but the pain is minimal. It can leave red marks if the Dom gets too carried away, but otherwise, it just leaves the cheeks deliciously rosy. Excellent choice for a beginner.

 

[sophia jane]

Shang has that. There was a thread, I remember, with a whole series of photos of various floggers and things. Shang had pix and a solid line of good and useful information.

Eagerly awaiting a link to Shang's thread.

ETA: Anything can be used for a beginner if wielded by a good top.

 

[Guest]

I say you should start a beginner as you mean to go on. May I recommend a bullwhip, potato peeler and anvil?

 

[TxRad]

Fingertips work wonders as do the cupped hand... a caressand an loud pop, stinging along the edges but no lasting marks... very sensial if don't right...

 

[BlackShanglan]

Eagerly awaiting a link to Shang's thread.

So sorry to disappoint - I think I may have pulled the pictures from that thread. I will scout about and see if I can verify.

[ETA: Oh, I tell a lie. The pictures are still on the thread. You can find it here: https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=304183. The two floggers described below are both pictured.]

I've got a flogger of my own that I think perfect for beginners. It's made of pigskin, which is very light and very soft. The flail strands are also cut quite wide - an inch or more - which diffuses the force of the strike. The effect is delightful; you can strike as hard as you like with it and never really hurt anyone, but it does give a sense of impact and a very light sting to the skin. It leaves no marks, but if you strike quite hard with it, it makes a sharp crack that sounds impressive despite being harmless. It's also pleasantly soft to the touch, as the pigskin is very thin and sueded, so it also works for stroking or petting.

The other suggestions are also quite good. Stella's suggestion of fur is excellent, as it helps to diffuse and mute the force of the blow. I've got a lovely flogger of silky black cords tipped with mink tails; it's really a stunner in its feel. That would also be suitable to a beginner, as the cords are relatively thick (which creates less sting) but not too heavy (so no hard thump), and the mink tails are quite the exotic treat.

Hope it helps. I will rummage for pictures, but I think they have departed.

Shanglan

 

[dr_mabeuse]

I'd go with a crop. They're small, precise, and give a nice, sharp, sting that will make Audrey gasp, plus, they're wonderfully menacing and very butch. They'll leave some red marks, but not welts, as long as he doesn't really wail on her.

A flogger is more gentle, but possibly too gentle, and a flogging is a big deal. You don't use a flogger like a whip or a crop. The blows don't hurt, rather it's the cumulative stimulation where the skin gets red and very sensitive and then the endorphins start. That takes time and a special kind of rhythmic stroke to do it right.

If he were going to tie her up and punish her, he might use a flogger, but for some quick over-the-desk action, I'd use a crop. For me, a cat is too hard to control. A crop is precise.

They make special "slappers" too, but then you'd have to describe what they look like, and they're pretty much modifed crops anyhow. A paddle might be good, but paddles always bring up asociations of fraternities and ping pong for me (sorry.) There's always the good old hairbrush too, but that's really going to make her yell. They hurt.

Stella's belt is a good idea though. Very dramatic.

Here's a crop that has a paddle end for a nice slapping effect. It's a shorty, about 18" long, they say: http://www.stockroom.com/g/a356.jpg

You want me to finish the scene for you? I'd love to. Tell me how many strokes he's going to give her and what Audrey's reaction should be: secret pleasure? shock and arousal? tears and pleading? Or an angry knee in father's balls?

 

[wishfulthinking]

Angel, what the hell does a potato peeler look like, or are you talking literally? eek.

I'm going to check out your thread, shang, to get some inspiration. I like the idea of a flogger. I want all bark and pretty much no bite.

Tx, I was originally going to go for an over the lap spanking, but the story seems to call for more. I have to top the chastity belt from the last chapter!

 

[wishfulthinking]

You don't use a flogger like a whip or a crop. The blows don't hurt, rather it's the cumulative stimulation where the skin gets red and very sensitive and then the endorphins start. That takes time and a special kind of rhythmic stroke to do it right.

The time issue has put me off a flogger! The era is before belts, otherwise Stella's suggestion would have been handy. But I also want the readers to know there torment is planned

If you are serious, I would love to see where you would take it, particularly with your strong bdsm flavour. I'm trying for the little bit of tears, lots of gasps, mostly shocked arousal, heavy reluctance, no intercourse or orgasm. As for the father - controlled arousal, wanting to tease her to the point of no return, frustrated, to show her who is in charge.'Yeah, no need to say it

 

[Guest]

Angel, what the hell does a potato peeler look like, or are you talking literally? eek.

I'm going to check out your thread, shang, to get some inspiration. I like the idea of a flogger. I want all bark and pretty much no bite.

Tx, I was originally going to go for an over the lap spanking, but the story seems to call for more. I have to top the chastity belt from the last chapter!

I was being utterly sarcastic. Apparently, the drink I mixed myself as a night cap last night hijacked my keyboard and I seem to have posted something inane on every page on the AH front page.

 

[BlackShanglan]

Personally, I can get quite a lot out of a flogger in a short period of time, but I do think that Dr. M. has a good point on ease of use. You need space to use a flogger, and it's nearly impossible to wield one effectively while also holding someone down or remaining in close contact with him/her. A paddle or short crop is definitely more maneuverable.

As for whether floggers can inflict serious pain ... my dear Dr. M., I would be delighted to persuade you that they can. Honestly, one has to be quite careful with a couple of mine, or there would be some long-term consequences.

Shanglan

 

[Stella_Omega]

The time issue has put me off a flogger! The era is before belts, otherwise Stella's suggestion would have been handy. But I also want the readers to know there torment is planned ...

In that era there was a ton of leather around- and there were belts back in the pre-Christian days. If this guy does this regularly, he would have a strap around, just for the purpose... vicious bastard that he is!