Story help, please -- camera

[PennLady]

Thanks everyone for all their suggestions, and now I need to ask another favor. Is there someone out there who's willing to beta read this for me? I finished it last night, and if one of you with your photography knowledge could give it a once over, if only for the camera parts, I'd appreciate it. The story is erotic horror, straight sex, and approx 10,500 words.

Feel free to PM me.