Story Help - First time gay sex

[Curious4bottom]

I've put a story idea up a few times here before but nobody's wanted to write it yet. I put together a draft together, but it's not very good. I'm hoping someone will want to take it and expand/improve it. It's about a first time having gay sex. The main character is conned into it by the husband of a girl he is trying to hook up with. Let me know if you're interested

 

[Hypoxia]

So write it. Then re-write it. So what if it's not very good? Lots of what shows up here is not very good. After you rewrite it a few times, and consult an editor, it might be not so bad. Give it a try. All you have to lose are time and self-respect.

 

[MyRubiLips]

Curious, start with some basics... Is what you've written so far at least 750 words? That is the minimum word count allowed. So, if your current tale is under that you have one goal there. Next, as a small reminder, make sure any character is 18 or older. Is this story based on real events? Even if it's not, can you add some real emotion for a first timer? Maybe nervousness, excitement, etc.

Once you think the story sounds interesting and you think it's finished, go to the Editor's Forum and ask for someone to look it over.

If you think you're currently stuck, ask (in this thread) if anyone remembers their first time receiving anal...or any other question you may have.

Don't sell yourself short! You may surprise yourself!