Story feedback

[pam2018]

Hello there, I am still finding my feet with all this and had a story I crafted sent back and looking on tips and advice on where I went wrong

 

[StillStunned]

What was the reason for the rejection? You should have had a message explaining.

 

[FromManyOne]

The easy thing to do is look at the Sent Back tab of your Works. Maybe take a screen capture (Ctrl-Shift-S in most web browsers) and post it here?