Hey guys, I'm curious as to what you think about my latest interracial story "Tribal Calls". It's about a German wife getting taken during video chatting with her husband back home while she's on safari in Africa.
Any ideas, comments and incentives are most welcome, especially when it comes to character development, dialogue, describing vs. showing, and writing in general.
Cheers! Archie89
https://www.literotica.com/beta/s/tribal-calls
Any ideas, comments and incentives are most welcome, especially when it comes to character development, dialogue, describing vs. showing, and writing in general.
Cheers! Archie89
https://www.literotica.com/beta/s/tribal-calls
