Story: Farmer's Daughter

[Torg]

justahack started Farmer's Daughter and I've added quite a bit to it (40%).

Stereotypical broken-down car, must stay at farm, attempt to have sex with nubile farmer's daughter and not get caught or shot by farmer. There's just something about this that caught me. Lots of possibilities. Some end in death or imprisonment. Cool.

Read it.

 

[airwreck]

It was this story from a Google search that discovered Chyoo for me. I added some new threads (waiting for approval...) that hopefully wraps up some threads have been left hanging.

BTW, Torg there's one thread where you had changed the POV from 2nd person to 1st person. I hope you can fix that and the few spelling/grammar mistakes as well.

 

[Torg]

It was this story from a Google search that discovered Chyoo for me. I added some new threads (waiting for approval...) that hopefully wraps up some threads have been left hanging.

BTW, Torg there's one thread where you had changed the POV from 2nd person to 1st person. I hope you can fix that and the few spelling/grammar mistakes as well.

I fixed the switch to 1st person. I'll look for spelling/grammar later.

 

[Torg]

I hope you can fix that and the few spelling/grammar mistakes as well.

I just need to reiterate that I love writing for this story. I always come back with more ideas. Mmmmm.

Did I fix the grammar mistakes? I'm thinking I did, since on rereading, I'm missing them. Or I'm nuts. Don't answer that!

Also, several authors have contributed since the last update, including airwreck, kiahoga, whizzper, CLITaurus, and myself. I'm pretty lackadaisical about these updates, so I apologize ahead of time.

Check out the threads that follow Loretta to the barn, and some of the loose ends tied up by airwreck.

Enjoy.

 

[whizzper]

I like the story...but...uhh...I haven't added to it (yet) I have a couple other stories I want to develop (Wishful, Hard Choice, Teaching Taryn, and Pleasure Yacht) that I keep drawing a blank on heh