philosophette
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Hi everybody.
This is about 1,000 words long so won't take long to get through. It's a nonconsent story, and although some have said it's quite disturbing, it's not as nasty as some stories in that section.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=498922
So,
-The shortness of the story, and the way it's told, is meant to convey a fractured quality to these memories. Have I pulled that off?
-Is it erotic?
And of course, I look forward to whatever else you have to say. Thank you.
This is about 1,000 words long so won't take long to get through. It's a nonconsent story, and although some have said it's quite disturbing, it's not as nasty as some stories in that section.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=498922
So,
-The shortness of the story, and the way it's told, is meant to convey a fractured quality to these memories. Have I pulled that off?
-Is it erotic?
And of course, I look forward to whatever else you have to say. Thank you.