Story: Dark Angel

[supman]

Fanfic from the long canceled show.

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/4204

Deals with mostly Bondage/Drugs/Coercion at the moment, so it might not be everyones cup of tea.

Story is a few months old, with around 70 threads. Pretty much just looking for feedback of any kind. I know my writing isn't that great. And it definitely feels like I'm writing the same scenes over and over again ><. So yeah, new threads, reviews, comments, anything to help inspire me or improve my writing.

 

[supman]

updates to the story. Still looking for any kind of feedback.

Sky1269 added a thread.
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/62624/56140

And I continued a thread on a plot that was requested by email.
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/62711/56140

 

[supman]

Just added a 7000 word story, cut into 15 or so threads. It starts here.
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/66238/66238

In addition to my post I've had a few updates from over the past week or so from a number of different writers.

452sexy
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/65074/66238

slutnutz
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/66069/66238
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/65926/66238

hippogriff
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/65602/66238



Any reviews / criticisms / thoughts would be greatly appreciated.

Majority of the story deals with bondage, blackmail, reluctance, and a little mind control. So if you don't like any of those you might want to stay away.